good chapter, if a bit pushing the line of R and NC-17. Not a problem for me, but it might be for someone else. Dunno exactly what the line is so... *shrug* i liked it. Well written, and a good bringing together of all the stuff that's happened so far.

sorry didnt feel like signing in i am just reading this, so thalia is pregnate damn she is pretty fuckin lucky i dont no anyone who gets pregnate on the first night so is it a boy or girl oo i hope its either a girl or a boy and girl hey thats what it should be coz thats rare for elves i think and if its a girl they should name it nianna after me and the elven witch princess or whateva alls i know is legolas loves singing about her dont ya agreez

What can i say? Hm...it was GREAT! That is how it should be in relive not the you know todays look on love that love. update soon!

Wow... I think that I'm... wow... That chapter has to have been one of the best you've written. Great Job!

Great chapter. I really can't think of anything else to say. I'm tired and kinda brain dead. Again, great chapter. I didn't notice all that many typos. I can only remember one. It was an N instead of an M. That doesn't really matter though so you can just ignore my bringing it up. I feel so happy for Thalia and Legolas. :) Oh yeah, chapter 5 didn't really make sense. I should have said that last time I reviewed, but I forgot. It was good, just pretty confusing.

oo i knew it! well, i guessed that the great gift was a child. yay! they got married! i'm happy.

Aw! That was cute! So what are you gonna do now? What's gonna happen to the baby? Come on, update! Or whatever, I just wanna know what happened to the baby and to them and all that.
Great chapter! Duh, your chappies are always great!
Hugs,
nt

I am offline for a few days and look what I miss! Though I'm glad I didn't have to endure that cliff hanger. *sigh* wow that was beautifully done and I love the tent part.
*sigh* and now it's time to . . . *pricks Katlin on one side and Glorfindel on the other forcing them closer together*
More please!

YAY! COOLIES! HE DESEARVES IT! I just hope she doesn't get all 'EP!' ABout it and freak. She deserves a cool life! _

you said naked! no . . . wait no you didn't, oops! well can you blame me? every guy I've dated turns . . . you know and I can't stand thinking Legolas as . . . you know BECAUSE THEN I WOULD HAVE NOBODY! *bawls* but since you cleared it up the whole naked/half naked thing, then yes I do approve *grins and blushes* every girl's fantasy!
YAY! THEY'RE MARRIED! OR BOUNDED OR WHATEVER YOU CALL IT! AND THEY'RE GOING TO HAVE KIDS! YAY! *does the happy dance* YAY! kids need names! oh oh oh oh oh names! I want to name my kids Lily and Kevin but I don't think those would be good elvish names . . . lily might work though . . . oh update soon! I love this story more than ever!

**sigh** so pretty! Ah to be an elf and have a wedding like that! They're just seem so much more personal and special then our weddings. Once again, wonderful chapter! and I cant wait for the next one! yay!

Hi, this is angelhair reviewing chapter five when she really wants to do another reveiw for chapter 6 BUT 'FIDO' WON'T LET HER... *grumble*
Anyways, sorry I'm reviewing again, I did that first review rather quickly...
OK. Not meaning to sound like a feminist here, but why is it ALWAYS the girls that sacrifice their virginity...? Why can't guys make that special sacrifice to their loved one too? I mean, all guys were virgins at one point in their life... maybe because it's not 'attractive' for guys to be unexperinced? Not saying that alot of guys are 'unexperinced', because lord knows they aren't. :S
Remember, this IS NOT a 'dis', it is a 'discuss'. LOL! Actually, this whole debate popped up in my mind... you made it sound so poetic that Thalia was sacrificing her virginty, 'a sacrifice that would be cherised'. ah... i wish i could write like you! But anyway, not saying that i REALLY wanted legolas to be a virgin... come on, he's been around for 20 years! ;-)

Awesome chapter! Do elves even have honeymoons? I was just sort of curious.

WOW! Those wedding speeches were so beautiful! And the end! Oh, please update soon!

very good chapter