This story is very original and made for some very interesting reading! Good job writing it although you definitely left to many ends untied with this ending. I look forward to reading the sequel.

o.0 Pretty good. I got a bit confused, but after reading over again I got it. Good job.

That was an AWESOME fanfic! You discribed their personalites well. I loved the plot too. Keep it up in the sequel...if you have one, but i hope you do.

Ended a bit abruptly, but then again that's Xenosaga style if you do recall the ending to Episode I.

CC: Serveral typos are littlered throughout this piece, but the characterizations are very true to their originals. Simply put: I can see this as a chapter in the Xenosaga series. Some of the chapters may need merging to make their lengths more uniform with the ending chapters, but that's just me being nit-picky :P

I strongly adivce this auther to NEVER STOP WRITING, and to also work on that sequal more before I find the address and make them.

Good job ^^

I think that this was a very good story and u did a good job with it. Keep up the good work and try to come up with more to add to it if u can.

OMG! That was an awesome ending to your story! Keep up the good work! ^-^

Em

Great job. *can't think of anything to say*

Woot! I'm almost finished with your story!

Em

Great job. I wish I could read the last chapters, but it is time for class... Hopefully I will have them all read by today or tomorrow.

Em

;_; I'm crying because it was such a good story!!

Oh wow! So cool! But it's a bit of a bitter sweet ending with KOS-MOS feeling rejected and all! Can't wait to see what these new developements will lead to! I guess that's a completely new story. *sets up barricade* Well if you get beaten up by a mob how will I ever find out!! Can't let that happen! =)

It's always sad to see good fics come to an end. This actually was one of the better chaos/chaos-kosmos fics, but allow me to comment that the last two chapters felt kind of rushed and a few things were left to the imagination, maybe you can write an epilogue or a one-shot sequel to clear them up, of course if you feel like it, none the less this as I previously have said was a good story, and you deserve applaus for the effort you put in it.

I get the feeling that you have a sequel planned for this. There's just too much left unexplained. I'm sorry, but I was a little disappointed. Everything felt a little rushed. That's not to say that this is a bad story: it's a WONDERFUL story. Maybe it's just me, but I was hoping for a little more. Please, please make a sequel!

The last chapter was slightly hard to follow. It's great to see that you've finished what you set out to do. As a whole, the story is among the tops here and it has been a pleasure to read it! Great job and I hope you explain your cryptic author's note toward the end!

What exactly was Allen? And the final chapter was a little bit hard to follow... Oh, and please make a epiloge chapter! I want to see Shion get all mad at Allen for keeping secrets from her! Please?! The end... I hate those words!

Awesome chapter.

OMGs! Nylil, Maieve, and Araneda were in this chapter!!

"Albedo: (hugs her from behind) yes you did my lovely flower
Nylil: OOleaps straight up into the air in surprise lands off to the side) STOP DOING THAT!"
^That reminds me of real life... o.O^ Gah! Major flash back from today... o.O *Dies*

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Em ^^