Please continue this story! I'm waiting anxiously! All of your stories are great but this is I think my favorite :)

great

WOW! I'm floored by the ingenuity of the idea of this story. How creative! I sincerely hope that you will pick it back up because I'd really like to see where you will take it. :)

wow, first off wow. your a brilliant writer.

At first i thought maybe i wouldnt like it, but well i was really truelly wrong, it was a little confussing but it made sense in the end. i hope more is to come. i may have already mentioned this but your a brilliant writter, you are. so dont stop writting, i look forward to reading the rest of it, when it is finished.

brilliant bloody brilliant

I have nothing useful to say, except that you seem to be missing a word out of every third paragraph or so, so instead, have some snarky quips:

Hmm... this looks like a job for the planet clearing squad!

A government official who said he was there to help but left out that he was there to help *himself?* Inconcieveable! (snort)

I really don't want to see the result of a Slayer getting snaked. Even one of the regular Pack would be bad news.

Ciao!

- CD

Oh Please Please Update! I love, love, love this story! Please keep writing. ::GIves Puppy Dog Eyes::

Lupa

intense or what. you have done a real good job cant wait for the next chappy poor Selmac/Jacob alone with the wolves/ The Pack but he'll get through it good luck with the next chappy! :)

Wicked Story!

Please Continue Writing!

Wonderful story! I enjoy the crossover with SG1. I hope you are going to continue this soon.

I really like this story. And I hope that you finish it because I would lke to know what happen to buffy and the pack on their mission. So I hope you write more.

Oh, Please Please Please! Write more. Update. Please?

Okay time for plan B. The fearsom the dreadful

Puppy Dog Eyes!

::Gives major Puppy Dog Eyes::

::Doubles Puppy Dog Eyes to include watery eyes and trembling lower lip::

I love this story and it's very original.

Well, Bye!

Lupa

shit. they're in trouble. i hate doctors.

I don't suppose your going to update this anytime soon? cause its super realy extremely excellently good. its as good as blood bonds and better thatn the 'Tall Tale' series.

..Gee..Nice place to just STOP! Agghh! You have so many stories going at once! Are you even gunna be able to finish them? Or if you lose your muse? Eek! Well. I liked this one too. and..just.. I havn't read ANYTHING like it. It's really interesting.

Oh! BRILLIANT!