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| xanya-forever 2004-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseyay, the ending really warmed my heart. This was another great fic about these two - you seem to really know how to write them effectively. I felt really sorry for Lilah during it, cos I know I would be completley in love with Wes if I were in her position, and feel that longing for him to love me. Anyway, as I said before, the ending was perfect, absolutely perfect. Lovely work! |
| Freakazoid 2004-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIs it hot in here or is it just me? The post-sex ritual's very detailed and this fic sits nicely pre-Slouching Towards Bethelehem. 'prays, pleads, begs, bargains with The Powers That Be' Would Lilah do that? Seems OOC to me. |