Alright, I don't get on fanfiction often, but this is one story I would love to finish reading. )

Please complete it! D

Sincerely,

WarriorKnight

please update before next year!

i really like this, its so well done :D

I like the story!

update soon!

ARE YOU GOING TO COTINUE THE STORY OR WAS THAT THE END? PLEASE FINISH IT!

haha, go Alanna! I cant wait for Jon to be shocked. Please update soon!

Hmm... you do have a wonderful writing style, but two years between updates is just a *bit* long, don't you think so? This is one that I'd be tempted to add to a story alert list, but I'm afraid that it will take you so long to update that I'll have to reread the entire story when you do. I like the way you have the plot moving and I'm enjoying reading it. Please do not take my review as a flame or anything of the sort. I think your story is wonderful and you have some great ideas. In fact, in my own writing I'm often guilty of the exact same thing. I hope that you continue because you do know how to write.

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its great

I like your story alot.

I'd like to see the next part! Badly. I like the idea of this and the havoc it could bring with it.

Alanna? At a BALL? Omg, I've gotta read this one...please update soon and make my day.

I really loved this - it's awesome!

Are you going to update this? it would be great if you did!

Update more! i love this! If u like AJ stories give mine a try. I love this story keep the good work.

L.

this is good so far. you are a good writer. ican see where this would come into the story and it is completely plausable

update soon please!

Great story! I really like it! Please continue!

I'm glad you decided to continue writing this, it sounds very interesting.

And I'm glad you gave a little glimps into their personal life as a couple since Tamora doesn't do that and I was always curious about how they acted with each other when no one else was around.

Anyway I really enjoy your writing style, a good balance of description, dialogue and I can't even remember the other word I was going to use but its good.

I'm also really glad it's A/J because like you I haven't read or been into this fandom for quite a while and so its good to see there are some good stories that have been written since I returned.

I've put you on my favorite Story and Story alert list in hope that you do update soon.

Tsarina Sofia

P.S. I didn't realise that there were so many Australian Authors on this site and nearly all of em are A/J lol or at least thats the impression I probably haven't seen all of em, and I thought I'd be one of the only Australians lol, well glad to know I'm not. Cool!