cool story !

I FINISHED! Whoop-whoop! It took me DAYS! But it was worth it. I must admit, my eyes were getting a little warm when you almost sent Hermione back in time, and I rarely ever cry while reading books. I didn't actually cry, but I was close to it.

This epilogue was awesome, and it opens up a window of possibilities.

I LOVED YOUR STORY!

-AnnabethChase5450

Something you said in this chapter - "Two times you've gotten in my way girl," said Voldemort. "This is the third." - triggered a memory of mine. And then, you start listing the instances Hermione AND Remus faced Voldemort and escaped. You've also said that they were having a boy.

Crap crap crap crap crap CRAP!

"The one with the power to vanquish the Dark Lord approaches…born to those who have thrice defied him, born as the seventh month dies…and the Dark Lord will mark him as his equal, but he will have the power the Dark Lord knows not…and either must die at the hand of the other for neither can live while the other survives…the one with the power to vanquish the Dark Lord will be born as the seventh month dies…"

Don't you DARE make Voldemort go after the Potters, the Lupins, or the Longbottoms! Although, this threat is a little late, seeing as you've already finished...Oh well, I just won't like the story very much, then.

But there's the Severus factor. He told Voldemort about the prophecy, but he hadn't gotten onto the Order's side yet when he told. No one better tell him! But then, what would happen to the prophecy... Oh well, now I'm looking too deep into this. You're a brilliant author, and I'm sure you've got this all planned out for my enjoyment as I finish!

I know this is overdue, as I'm reading your story after you've finished it, but I just wanted to get my metaphoric ten points. Little Hangleton is where the Riddles lived, and the Gaunts lived just outside of it. Voldemort's family, to be specific.

Oh my goodness it's over! Wow! One of the best stories I have ever read. I'm a little sad that Lily died but it was your choice. Amazing job, good original plot, well written, and thank you so so much for making it clean. It's so hard to find an amazing story that is perfectly clean like yours. Thanks a ton!

Every time I read it, it's pure brilliance all over again.

I love it.

Sophie

Very nice. :)

HOMG THIS IS ABSOLUTELY THE EPITOME OF THE TIME TRAVEL STORY! I can't believe I hadn't stumbled upon this before...
I really have to applaud you for writing a fic that wasn't afraid to rewrite canon. I'd gotten so used to Time Turner fics where Hermione was afraid to change anything, but yours just steamrolled through, and I LOVED IT. I also love that you at least kept Harry's essence true to canon; even though Lily died, the way you set it up was brilliant and just HAD to be done. It wouldn't have made sense otherwise.
(On a side note, I admit I'm incredibly curious as to what you think about the Deathly Hallows, and if your opinion on Severus has changed any since the time you wrote this.)
But anyway, EASILY one of the Top Three Sagas of Time Travel in the HP-verse. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT. :D

omfg march 10th is MY birthday! anyway loving this fic x

Really awesome! I love it!! Congrats for such an incredible story!! =)

WOW! Talk about an Ultimate favorite story! Incredible!! I am REALLY, REALLY, REALLY hoping for a sequel! I'm going to go lookand if you haven't written one I'm hoping your planning one.

OMG! i dont even know where to begin. i couldnt stop reading this. i read it all day every day until 3 in the morning. it was amazing! i couldnt stop thinking about what happened next. hehe i think the ending was perfect and although i was sad that lily had to die it did make the story even better because of the emotion her death added to the story. i also have to say NATHANIEL is the perfect name! i almost cried when they brought hermione back to the school and she was about to go back to her time. and i laughed so hard when sirius showed up at godrics hollow after hermione gave him sleeping draught and he said "its hermione she drugged me" idk why but that was just hilarious to me. i would have liked to know more about the relationship between sirius and hermione because they just seemed so attracted to each other but i think you did an amazing job!

I loved it!

I'm not usually a big reader of fan fic, but this one was mentioned on a blog as an especially good one, and I was drawn in by the idea of time travel, and I'm very partial to the character of Lupin.

Excellent writing! I couldn't "put it down". I've been reading it on my iPhone for the last two days!

Thank you for this wonderful contribution to the Potter universe!

Very interesting story, but I wish you wrote the next seven years too. The meeting of two Hermiones (and subsequent marriage of Sirius with the younger one) would be most interesting to follow.

I am enjoying reading this fic so far (which isn't really far since I'm only on chapter 5 but still...:-)). I've also managed to figure out what the words on the door mean: "Tsap strawgoh seil rood siht hguorht" to plain English: "Hogwarts past lies through this door" :-).

EagleBlaze