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| Yeyana Valentine 2007-09-20 ch 1,  | abuseB-but... I love you for this. -cries- ... Ehm... do you happen to be on DeviantArt, as well? Because another member and myself have a hatchling club for Samurai Jack yaoi, and I was wondering if I could possibly make this an addition? |
| goldengal 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI like your use of the english language... Yes u do need professional help. Anyhoo yhis was good. |
| Caroline Fultz 2006-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseHmm, I really dont know what to say. It's an interesting concept. If one were to complicate the thought of why these two did those things, it would be this. Interesting, that's my opinion. |
| Dragonfire411 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseGood story. I like the other one as well. |
| Talia 2005-02-24 ch 1, | abuseNice fic. |
| floppybelly 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abuseit was good, but I wouldn't exactly say that mercy is a synonym for all the other words you named... |
| QQQ p 2004-09-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nice work. I like this, the perfect prologue. I don't think you need "professional" help at all. The only thing I expect you are stuck on is maybe how to continue and that is a fault that everyone has, even the professionals. |
| j752572 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked it ^_^ very good |
| Loki-chan (too lazy to sign... 2004-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow!! What a fic!! I generally as a rule don't read Jack fics because the majority of them are poorly written, but this is a gem. I love it. 'm going to refer it to my other Jack friends, and hopefully they'll find it as enjoyable as I did. :D I know Oni will...>:) |
| Rayene 2004-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh, a wonderful homage to the many-faceted Aku. He's a good villian. And this nudges a careful toe over the line of love/hate. Its beautiful and poetic. Nice. Very nice. |
| chickens 2004-03-12 ch 1, | abuseHuh, good. And thing about it is I could see Jack doing that ni that situation |
| RancidFarce 2004-03-07 ch 1, | abuseGrr. I'm not one for language, but the rest of this submission is really great. I think you've captured the internalization of Aku here. The point of view that you present came across as air-tight. Very nice. As for the rest? The thoughts and statements seem to flow one on top of the other -- sort of like layers of water. Good job, and good ending. |