Interesting Off-shoot. I liked the first chapter better maybe only cause it was longer. I hope you update SoSHoG soon...

Interesting!

I love this story please update.

Liked your story so far I hope you continue.

Ah. I didn't think you would actually continue this offshoot. I still enjoy reading the main story. Have you updated that? Let me see. . .

Heh, are you going to carry on?

will you have his eyes turning red in the oringinal story? if you do let someone see it and then let his studder "my eyes red? how?"

Not learned Occulmancy yet?! This IS Salazar 'Paranoid' Slytherin right?. . . Blast, I happen to like Snape-any possibility of respect in the future?

Sorry, I can't quite follow any more; what is the link between chapter one and two? Maybe this has something to do with the fact chapter two is named chapter nine? Well, liked the first part, anyway, had just hoped for something equally good for the second part, but after reading it my hopes on anything good following are kinda drowned...

thats funny-in a weird, twisted sort of way. so jenni. ooh, i like the sound of that. jenni anyway i liked it and this is kim. kim holder.

Still looking forward to more! hee he!