Burst out at just the SIGHT of the second chapter.

I really enjoyed the characterization of Jaken, and the fact that you acknowledged how he's actually a demon with a water alignment. He really should've been given at least one part of the canon where he was swimming and being competent at something, poor guy. xD

-Sunny

Hehe good one...really original...I liked the fact that Rin here is not a naive idiot...

Oh, man. That's hilarious. I'm still laughing. Way to go Rin.

*giggles* thats so GREAT XDXDXD _ Rin's so adorable heheh very cute

lol! And what does our beloved Sesshoumaru think? Too cute. Thanks for the laugh.

Aww, Rin is NOT that evil!

She's just too cute and devoted to be evil.

"Yes, and the diabolical watermelon, dangerous orbs of—OW!"

I will have to remember that! Diabolical, dangerous orbs of OW! \0/

Jaken is just too paranoid...

that was funny! i laughed my head off! especially in chapter 2:Rin's turn. please i must read more of Double edged!

Lol. -roffles-

Awesome! Holy crap, I love this story.

What a hilarious twist of events in this chapter! I half-expected to hear another long version of the river incident from Rin - something giggly and innocent, full of desire to play and explore. How delightfully funny it was to hear 'the truth'. Well done!

Ha ha. That's great. _ This was a good story. I tell ya, I didn't expect Rin to really try to kill Jaken. That was a nice, humurous twist. Good work.

I laughed at "Rin's Turn". I want to kill Jaken too!

YEA RIN! someone finally agrees with me that Jakken needs to die! YEA!

O.o OKAY It's scary imaging Rin tring to do someone in. How can she easily think about killing somebody, but Jaken has so mull things over? I enjoyed how long and thoughtful you made Jakens, but then you made Rins 100 words long! _