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Kimmiko T.
2009-04-24 . chapter 1
I love this story!
Please update soon!
Thanx!
Crystal Twilight
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
Interesting idea for a one-shot. Thanks for posting!
poems2songs
2007-10-04 . chapter 1
nice story... really liked it... good job... great work...
QueenTatooine
2006-05-22 . chapter 1
Well written and very insightful. Good job with this.

~QueenTatooine
Yusuke brat
2005-01-12 . chapter 1
this is nice! me like!
orange-InuYasha
2004-07-03 . chapter 1
wow. lets just put it this way...unexpected in a good way. cool.
Kirei Baka Kasumi
2004-04-14 . chapter 1
aw... that was so sweet!
Zanamra
2004-04-14 . chapter 1
This is an adorable story! =3 I lurve it!
trunksgirl
2004-03-29 . chapter 1
HA! I found it. It took me forever but I found it. It was very cute. Inuyasha makes a good daddy how sweet. We want more, we want more. Could you do a fic about Kagome needing a vacation and leaving Inuyasha and his pups to fend for themselves for a week? You don't have to if you don't wan't to but it would be ok if you don't. Any story you make that branches from this one would be great.
Sweet Angie 7
2004-03-10 . chapter 1
great start hope you update soon ^_^
Ashley (aka InuMad)
2004-03-10 . chapter 1
oh, that was soo cute. I loved it. definitely write more. i cant wait to hear more about Jiro, Inuko, and Saya. but in your next one describe them more. do they have ears, claws, fangs, or what? and Saya, what kind of powers does she have? i wan to know all about them. they sound so cute! ^_^ *grins* hopefully you will give lots o' details... update with more soon.
HMPrune
2004-03-09 . chapter 1
Nice! Great idea to have Inuyasha have a child who doesn't fit in because he's NOT a hanyou...
Nice start to the Courtship universe.
Trillian
2004-03-08 . chapter 1
I'm afraid this will sound condescending, but I don't mean it to. This was so touching. Just so sweet. You've written Inu as a loving father and mate, just the way I think he would be. Not that I'm suprised, but this is beautiful. Another story very well done ~ I hope you will continue to write them.
Heather
2004-03-08 . chapter 1
GAH!! YOU DID IT AGAINA ND MADE ME CRY!
great awesome start...r u sure you want to make this a one-shot?!?!?!?
great one-shot e-m me if possible when you write a new chapter/one-shot ONEGAI!
Myuu_Foxgirl
2004-03-08 . chapter 1
*nods appreciativly* I like it^^ and I realize I'm not logged in _> lol, anyways..how old is Kano? er..you don't have to answer that..it's just my insatiable curiousity:D nice story, tho:D
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