 X2P3 2005-02-05 . chapter 8this a great story please continue an b as quik as u can with ur updates i love how uv'e made them gods an that kurt an rogue r twins it perfect |
 SilverVulpine 2005-01-20 . chapter 8This was a good, if somewhat short, chapter. Please update soon. |
 SilverVulpine 2005-01-17 . chapter 1A very good chapter! Please update. |
 GothikStrawberry 2004-12-25 . chapter 8Short but sweet!
VERY GOOD chapter!
Merry Christmas!!:) |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2004-12-24 . chapter 8O! I loved this chapter! So Rogue's character has finally come into play (I know she has already been introduced, but you know what I mean)! And Kurt can feel that something is wrong, that psyhic twin thing, huh? This is great! Update soon! |
 GothikStrawberry 2004-12-22 . chapter 7Bad things are going to happen, aren't they? Oh, well it probably wouldn't be much of a story if they didn't happen.
Can't wait for Rogue to join the X-men. I love the way you write, by the way. Very, very good!
Update soon!!:) |
 Mourning Bird 2004-12-20 . chapter 1 Erm...that's weird. I'm currently writting a story just like this. I started about three or four months ago. So, if you see one with the exact same concept as you I just want it to be known that I didn't copy you. |
 slickboy444 2004-12-20 . chapter 6Wow! This story is really cool! I love the concept of mutants being children of ancient gods from ancient mythology! I must really applaud you for thinking of such a unique and wonderful concept! And I must say, I am eager to read more! I would love to know what happens next and how things will develop for the Children and the growing family. And as for the list you mentioned at the bottom of chapter 6, I noticed that Scott, Logan, and Mystique weren't mentioned. Because of his powers, wouldn't Scott be like Apollo's son and Logan be the son of Ares or Herculies? Perhaps Mystique could be the daughter of Isis, the mother goddess of ancient Egypt. Just a suggestion! Great job! I love this story! You rock! Keep up the great work and I implore you to update as soon as possible! Peace out! |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2004-12-19 . chapter 7Wow! I've just finished reading all the chapters in this story. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! This is so different. Never have a read a story where the mutants where known as the children of God. This is so cool. I also love what you are doing for Rogue. When will she come more into play? When will she join the X-Men? Update soon so I can find out! |
 SilverVulpine 2004-11-30 . chapter 6This story is wonderful and highly original (as far as I know :D)! I'm keeping tabs on whose child is whose, so thanks a bunch for your help at the bottom. I can't wait for more! Please update soon! |
 WinkyBells 2004-04-24 . chapter 5*rubs sleepiness out of eyes* Too...bloody...early... BUT IT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER! And I mean that too. I liked the way you introduced Mystique and Kurt to everyone. Very nicely done. And don't worry! You can bust down that writers' block! (I need to go beat up a case of my own *^^*) Keep up the great work! |
 ray1 2004-04-23 . chapter 5Nice. I always knew that Mystique had a soft side. It's not often that another fanfiction writer revels it to the world. Update soon? |
 DemonRogue 2004-04-22 . chapter 5i like this story so far and do hope ya continue |
 Natural 2004-04-22 . chapter 5 Are you going to tell us who the parent god of each mutant is or will it just be Ororo and Jean that we know for sure? And will the Acolytes be in the story? |
 WinkyBells 2004-04-13 . chapter 4O...I LIKE this! It's intriguing and gives a whole new dimension to this fandom. My sister and I actually had a similar idea but for a different fandom a few years ago! Crazy, huh?
But back to the story! It's beautifully written. Good grammar and spelling! I think my only complaint is that the chapters are too short! The prologue sucked me in and now I want to know the whole story right now. I can't wait until you post more. This is captivating! |