that was so cute!

KOENMA YOU DICK! (Beats the tar out of him for hurting Botan)

Hiei: Remind me not to piss you off, K.C.

Botan: Dido!

K.C: _ I loved it bTW_ Keep it up!

out of charector but good but ooc cacles the good bye a little !

AW...I cried when I read the 'what is a hug?' part. That was so sad. I liked it though. The power to get an emotional reaction from your readers is a great thing.

Let me at him! Let me at him! How dare that brat do that to Botan! If I was Hiei I would slice that toddler into millions of pieces. The beatings he got from his father would be nothing after I'm through with him. (Author transforms into super saiyan and is held back by other characters) Anywho good fic! Take this Koenma! GALICK GUN FIRE! (Author aims Galick gun at Koenma and Koenma is turned into dust.

even though Hiei and Botan got together i really dont think koenma would do that but it is your ficbut anyway it ended to abrputly and i have read dozens of fics so i should know and wel it needs more angst,and thats all.

WOW! THAT WAS SO GREAT! VERY WELL WRITTEN! IS this a one shot or a chapter story? EITHER WAY I LOVED IT!

That is so sweet! I can soo see Hiei's innocent face!

You're an amazing writer please keep updating

great!

That was really good. I love Hiei/Botan fics. Write more Hiei/Botan please.

hiei and botan how sweat:)

i haven't read it yet but i love botan and hiei fics so wanted to say plz write sum more k

Please update your story!

THAT WAS AN AWESOME STORY HIEI! It was so Kawaii! (cute) Boton and Hiei would make a cute couple! Damn Koenma trying to take advantage of Boton like that! I'm glad Hiei came in and kicked his ass! I was suprised that you wrote a romance Hiei and Boton story. But you did tell me you liked the idea of those two being together. The story was excellent and very vivid in detail for a short story! Your story kicks other romance stories in the ASS! I'm going to go read it again! YAY!
Your friend- Kurama _