I found the Aston part to be the funniest. If there more scenes like that, I'd laugh a lot more. Keep up the good work!

[OT - To Ashley Lanford/Anchors - Rena/Ashton is not child abuse. Rena is 17; Ashton is 20. This isn't a big difference from her ''default'' love interest - Claude is 19. Rena is actually older than the girl Ashton is more likely to end up with - Precis, who is 16.]
Anyway, your story was entertaining. I had the exact same problem with the endings - I thought I was going to get Claude/Rena, Ashton/Celine, Precis/Leon and Noel/Chisato. I wound up with the first two couples, but the last 4 characters all had alone endings.

WOW...guess i'm not the only one with problems...

I hate this... Rena and Ashton... Don't you think that's child abuse? Or something like that?

what the hell is this?

messed up is right this sucks

Heeheehee. That was funny, but my ending was the other way around: Claude/Rena beach scene, Ashton/Rena ending.

Oh, I have been there and Understand all too well! Hahahahah! Let me guess, you used books. :)