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wildmageminx
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
Aw I like this I've only just watched the film for the first time and this would of been an awesome extra scene for the film. Thanks ;P
The Writer Forever
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
Brilliant! This story really put smile back on my face! I love how you wrote about Penny's and Jake's thoughts, you described everything so good! Yes, Johnny was great while dancing to others too, but with baby it definitely looked like he couldn't wait to pull her close to him again! Such a great observation!
I really liked the idea of writing down Penny's thoughts about whole thing because she and Johnny are def. like brother and sister and it is heartwarming to see her wanting the best for him! That's true friendship!
And the end cracked me up, hahahaha, Johnny sure read Penny and Jake's thoughts! :)
TheLeef
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
love this, i felt like you really captured the characters and got into their minds, making their actions probable.

i always felt that something like this should be the end of the movie, i just didnt know if i were imagining things because i wanted them to be together so bad :D
Anera527
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
OMG! I love this story! It's so sweet, and you wrote the story so well. I've always loved the movie, and your story does it justice.

Absolutely wonderful job!
Ghostwriter
2007-07-01 . chapter 1
Awesome. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
The Sway Wannabe
2007-05-11 . chapter 1
Very very good you should continue it some how.
Terra Rain
2005-04-16 . chapter 1
Aw! I LOVED this! It was exactly the sort of thing they would have done; perfect. YOu captured the feel of the movie completely. Kudos! - TR
shadowcat15
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
*sighs and puts her hand over her heart* Pretty!
ConnorsDawnSummers
2005-01-25 . chapter 1
You got all those characters down amazingly.:)
OTHlover04
2004-11-28 . chapter 1
that was good!
ProlificP
2004-10-15 . chapter 1
This is really sweet, I love it. Nice work!
IWRY-ALWAYS
2004-08-14 . chapter 1
Dirty Dancing is the best movie, I love your fic to death!
Xedra
2004-07-29 . chapter 1
Wonderful! You got Penny and Jake down pat. What a delightful story, just makes me sigh happily... now I have to got watch the movie again.
account.
2004-07-21 . chapter 1
aw great story
Wild Magelet
2004-06-08 . chapter 1
Ohh, this was so sweet! I love it.
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