Reviews for Family Relations: Chapter Four And What Is It Ex

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Becky (formally Known as "M... 2005-05-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseRemember Me? yeah, im back. But I didn't think YOU would be. This is a very nice surprise, i didn't think you would ever update again... but here we are. AHH! a Cliffy... Yikes, i dont like Cliffy's...You know what else I dont like? Reading Prequels.. which is why I'm going to try to read Family Relations without reading Enemies and Ruaway first. Yup. I can be your gunie Pig. Lets see how good P.A.R is at writeing a collection of story's but also allowing them to be individual reads as well. I have also desided Orion is an Idiot. If I had just taken a kid away from his Godparents, i wouldn't expect him to take a taxi by himself to my house. Which is about the equivilent of what Orion is doing... jeeze... Anyways, good chapter, I like your fan fics more than any others, mainly becuase it feels like im actually reading extensions of the 4th book by J. K Rowling! where would i be without you P.A.R? Oh yes, doing my homework, like a good little girl. Speaking of which i must be going! I have Midsummers Nights Dream quotes to be memoriseing. (maybe you could do a fan fic on that...? It would make my project more interesting!) You'll see my reviews again, once you post more of this story! Later Lady! -Becky
x-Faux-x 2005-03-23 ch 3,	abuseOh P.A.R :D It's like. Spring now! Spring is a very, very good time of year. Especially for writing. And updating. And stuff. Sigh. Well I am not very happy with Arabella, to tell you the truth. Manipulating Harry like that was a complete betrayal of his trust, and my feelings on her were a bit mixed even in Family Life, there were times when I was rather peeved at Sirius for putting Arabella above his godson. Hum complicated, complicated. Orion, how endearing. He reminds me a bit of Sirius, which I suppose would make sense being that they're brothers. He's quite good at his job, but really amazingly slow when it comes to simple things like not checking whether Harry can apparate before leaving him at the mercies of Death Eaters. And it was a bit conceited to assume Harry'd be better off with him than Sirius, seems more like he did it just to spite his brother than any real concern for Harry. Hum Harry's captive appears to be Katlin, who I haven't read about yet in Enemies. Not terribly fond of OC central stories to be honest, and I'm admittedly /very/ wary of thin female OC's with cascading dark hair and silk-smooth voices, but so long as we can see her faults it should be interesting :) Am looking forward to an update! Wink :D
BellaMonte 2004-12-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay, I am sufficiently calmed down now. :) Excellent chapter though, you just HAD to end on such an evil cliffy, ehh? sigh Tis the sadistic power given to writers. On the chapter itself. . . AW!! for Harry. That's what I figured to happen, his being too bewildered and intimidated to be able to speak/protest much. I can't help but not like Orion as a character, at least within this context and in reading Enemies knowing what he was going to do with Harry. I've no doubt you'll have him form a tight bond with Harry as well, though I'm missing Sirius and Arabella already. :( What a dumb*ss Orion is! OMG, he apparates away without Harry? and I've no doubt who this female is that grabs him. That was truly the brilliant and hilarious last line, though I'm getting the itching feeling that the long, flowing hair over Harry's chest is some sort of innuendo. Please don't tell me Harry's going to develop some sort of crush on her. . .hahaha! Well hey, if Harry likes older women, then there's hope for me :) this is long and rambly. It was perfectly PAR-esque in its form and character, and I cannot WAIT for more. Please o please don't make us wait too long. You could always drop us more chapters here and there. . . ;) Thank you thank you!
skahducky 2004-12-14 ch 3,	abuseWoah, it's Katlin! Umm...does Enemies take any part in this? If so, she might take him back to Orion, although I don't think that's the best course of action. I can't help but think that the person who grabbed Harry first was either Sirius or Arabella because you did stress that Harry didn't even bother to see who it was. Anyways, this is a great chapter. Please update soon!
Silverfox1 2004-12-14 ch 3,	abuseAnd he's supposed to be safe with Orion? Gee, you'd think an unspeakable would know such tiny details as at what age you're legally allowed to learn how to apparate. ... Somehow I suspect that the small child remark won't get over too well either ...
BellaMonte 2004-12-13 ch 3,	abuseGAH! will be back when i can breathe properly, then i will drop a review on this chapter's excellent points as well as it's single shortcoming: "evil cliffhanger! how dare you!" :D
Hyperkitti 2004-12-13 ch 3,	abusewow! Another little preview! Thankies to PAR and to Bellamonte for the Christmas pressie type preview thingymagicky...okay I'll just stop now. Update soon! Loving your fanfics as always, ~hyperkitti~
Becky 2004-07-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseHow did you know I had Fruit to Throw?!? Mentle Telepathey...freaky Hm...Harry is having a bit of a title delemia on what he should call his God-parents? I have a friend who was adopted just this year... He's 16... Referes to his gardians as "Mudder" and "da Ol' Man" That might just be the newfie accent takeing over though. Oh well, options to consider. This story is making Arabella sound evil. I've read Gentle Persusion (But Didn't review..heh...Stop glareing!)And it sounds like she was useing her...power-thinger...to presuade Harry to sign something she didn't want him to read. And that one paragraph about Arabella "doing her utmost best to keep him [Harry] and Sirius separated as much as possible, but always with her." Smells fishy. And thats not just becuause I live off the coast. Why did Harry Go with Orion... I would have have to been dragged kicking and screaming away from Sirius and Bella if i was in Harry's place... That kid is weird. Prolly why I like him. A secretary?!?!? waves hand around annoyingly in the air OH OH OH! PICK ME! Over here! This one, this ONE! I'll do it, but some part of me doubts your serious. Reading the response to the Reviewers... Longer than Family life, is that what IM reading?!? YAYNESS! That'll give me something to do in October when I'm in a new country and Friendless. Might have mentioned it to you in another review, but I'm moveing to the U.S of A. Same state as you i think, if you live in Mickey Mouse Land. Florida ahoi! Obey Gravity?!? Stupied Newton adn his Stupied Laws... I wanna Fly goal Danniget! anyway better end this review off. Wonderfull writeing, but i suppose your getting tired of hearing the same old thing, so I'll something a little more exciteing. !Bloody Brilliant Writing! See ya later PAR, nice hearing from you! Becky P.S Have you Seen the new Harry Potter movie yet? Did ya like it? I thought it was much better than the first two, allthought the shreaking Shack seen needed some more work... (they made it look like a bit of a joke).
Becky (otherwise known as "... 2004-07-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseWOW! Another Chapter! squeals like a little girl and hugs you Oh Goody! Hot dang! and all that happy go lucky stuff! wait a minute...Published March 8th!?! Ekk! Took me long enough to see it, didn't it?! On to the review, enough of my garble... I knew I had a reason to dislike Orion! Knew it, knew it, knew it. I honselty Can't see how this is helping Harry or Sirius out at all. Of course, I'm biting myself, becasue one never knows the strange fourms help can take... One time there was this really creepy guy who gave me a quarter for a pay phone when i missed a bus... and I mean really creepy...like... lazy eye and everything... Although I haven't read Enimies yet...maybe I should...Hm, a thought to work on. On another note, Poor Sirius... when's he gonna get that leg fixed? or was that mentioned in Family Life? I can't remember... I'll look that up, anyway, on to the next chapter! Tally-Ho!
Someone 2004-06-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseI like this Preview/story, also I remember some notes/ responses related to this story, I think in that Summary-based story you wrote a while back...which I just now read because I was bored, but if they aren't there I have no other suggestions, also you have such a talent for writing. I really like your stories P.A.R! I can't wait until the other story that goes with Family Life is finished!
sweets2(Cause ffnet definat... 2004-04-17 ch 2, anon.	abusePAR, Why? I mean can't we fall up? (Okay corney joke but had to try like I said finals approaching) Anyway, I can't believe that this is happening...wait scratch that I can believe this is happening. It's all part of why you wrote and are currently writing enimies...if Orion was not important he wouldn't be here. Harry's life keeps taking turns for better or for worse...unfortunately it is a lot of the latter. I just hope that Orion realizes that Harry needs Sirius and Arabella before it's too late.
SpecialParanoia 2004-04-11 ch 2,	abuseI like this one so far. Can't wait till you post the entire story, whenever that may be. I'm off to go find Enemies and/or Runaway, now! Can't wait for more!
Voltora 2004-04-01 ch 2,	abuseLonger than Family Life?! BRILLIANT!! We have to wait until the autumn? What! No! That's so cruel, teasing us like this. ^_~ Nah, it just gives me something to look forward to - trust me, I'll be counting the days. Oi, Orion! Bring Harry back this instant! pause He's not listening to me. Humph. folds arms and glares murderously at Orion I really ought to read some of your other fics to get some background on Orion. Well, that's my weekend plans sorted. Obey gravity, huh? Voltora floats up to the ceiling Oh, ick: cobwebs. Drops back down onto her seat Ouch. ^_^ Well, til next time, keep up the great work!
Voltora 2004-04-01 ch 1,	abuse"I look forward to it,' Orion stated as he stepped past Sirius and out into the hallway - where he suddenly tripped over Voltora's foot with a yelp of surpise and landed scrawled indigantly, face-first on the dirty floor. "Sorry,' said Voltora, past an innocent expression. 'Leg muscle spasm; happens sometimes.' ^_^ Oh, man alive, I'm fuming!! throws evil looks at Orion I'm feeling mad enough to thump him one - and I don't blame Sirius for feeling just as angry. Smarmy git. (Is that the right word?) Goes to next chapter, muttering curses at Orion under her breath
Von 2004-04-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseHm... I wonder why Arabella was trying to keep Harry away from Sirius...? OUTRAGE! (Slams fist on the ground) Arabella used magic on Harry, taking away his choice!! HOW DARE SHE?! And she has the nerve to think she deserves custody? If Harry ever found out she violated him like that... gr... That FILTH. Now I'm glad glad glad that Harry's going with Orion. Speaking of which, if you say I need to read those other stories first, I will.. but.. I'd already started them way back when... And found myself... well, not very interested. It's hard to, ya know? When all the characters are people you don't know nor care about. But I'll take another bash at it, if you say it'll increase the enjoyment of this story. Fall 2004? I live in Australia, so that's about now. You need a keeper? What for?

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