 luminousSpark 2009-06-22 . chapter 9OMG... cliffhanger! It's very well done! I love the story. Please update soon! |
 Renee the Rabid Squirrel 2005-04-09 . chapter 9*sniffles* Well written once again, and angsty as ever. I'm really enjoying the first person narrative. |
 mamawar 2005-03-27 . chapter 1YOU! ::ponits at vegeta9 with katana:: UPDATE THIS STORY OR I WILL BE FORCED TO USE DRASTIC MEASURES! ...Please...? ::puppy eyes:: |
 Ruler of Dark and Light 2005-03-26 . chapter 4I love this Story! |
 taukikage 2005-03-14 . chapter 9 T.T... That was so sad! ::hysterical tears:: Mokuba died! Aw, poor Moki! And poor Seto! SETO! He made me want to cry so many times! T.T (I'm kind of obsessed with him so that didn't really help the situation. ^^;) And poor Yami! Ga! I feel so bad for him! I'd never want to be in the same situation. (Sad thing is, I'd probably do what he wants to. I wouldn't want to kill anyone. Ok...maybe a few people... ^.^) I LOVED it! It was so good! ::insert hearts:: It was so well written! And the plot was sad but I loved it! (Though I have a habit of loving sad things. My favorite manga are X/19, and Angel Sanctuary.) I just loved it, really!! You're a very good author! You're now one of my favorites! ^^ Anyways, keep writing, and I'll keep reading!! And UPDATE! |
 Desidera 2005-03-14 . chapter 9Ah, I'm sorry I didn't see your update sooner! It's so great! I just want to cry with Yami! Poor Yami!
But Seto is great in this chapter! The way he just doesn't want to give Yami up, the way he clings to the feeling of being able to do something. Not wanting to lose another person to death.
I love the chapter!
And I'm glad you are alright, despite all that extreme stress! Poor you, I hope it really gets less work now!
Take care!! |
 Kawaii Chibi Yami 2005-03-10 . chapter 9yeah! update! finally~ man I know life is hard...*sigh* but wow thanks for this long chapter~ Poor Yami ^^| anyways update soon when you have time ok? i'll always be waiting! =]
Ja ne~ |
 Shinimegami7 2005-03-05 . chapter 9 Well, that was good. Kaiba finally made up his mind. I'm glad. It's nice that you updated as well. I'm even happier. Poor Yami.
I of all people should know your busy schedule... heh. I'm lazy, we both know it. But I'm pulling up my socks and getting to it. Muahahahaha, math has finally returned, and so has my challenge in life. So yeah...
Shinimegami7
"Salvage ships are designed for maximum maneuverability; you have to be able to take them any damn where and keep yourself in one piece while doing the job of salvaging. Commercial shuttles are⦠bricks with wings." - The ever wise words of Duo Maxwell.
This is from Sunhawk's fic series called the Ion Arc. |
 Phoenix87 2005-03-02 . chapter 9oh...this story is so sad! (but in a good way of course!)
is it wishfull thinking that this could have a happy ending? I hope, I hope, I hope!
please continue. |
 silverkitsune89 2005-02-28 . chapter 9Yay! You've finally written!
I love this chapter. Poor Seto-kun, having to go through so much and now this... |
 Nachzes Black-Rider 2005-02-28 . chapter 9 Nachzes: Yay! An update! [dances happily] Good chapter, man! |
 ka 2005-02-28 . chapter 9 u did a good thing when u updated after almost an year.i hope u won't let us wait a year again before u update again |
 DJ Silence Yuy 2005-02-28 . chapter 9yay! update!! And reading at the unGodly time of 5:47 in the morning when I should be eating breakfeast, lol.
This chapter was really, really good!! I didn't know (or either I forgot, lol) that Yami had fallen on the balcony. It was so sad how he was crying, but so sweet when Seto came out there and stopped him from leaving. Freaky though (meaning eyebrow raising in intruigue) when Seto gave Yami more blood.
And you talk about me having cliffhangers? Honey, every single chapter you write has a cliffhanger!! They may keep us on our toes, but...I want to pull all my hair out in a desperate attempt to find out what happens next!! So please update soon!! Please say your spring break is soon!
Atemu: ^_^
Hikari: update please. |
 Hakudoshi-chan 2005-02-27 . chapter 9An update woohoo...this is awesome ^_^ |
 Siiarrei 2005-02-27 . chapter 9 Hey. I loved that! its so sad, poor everyone! I love the way you show emotion in it, everything is so wonderful, and we all get over a few grammer mistakes,i didnt notice any ^.~ Update soon! |