What happens next?

oh wow what a neat story! i wonder what's up with her home and why everyone is acting so wierd? care to clue us in? i hope you update even though its been a long while it seems since this story was updated i'll put you on watch just incase though cuase strange thigns happen!

~MP

really good story honestly but seriously confusing. It seems as though its this whole kinda phscohloagical story where sarah cant seem to tell the differnince between dreams and reality. Like she's spent so much time reading wicca books and fantasy stories that she's forgotten how to tell whats real and whats fake. seriously confusing but its a good story none the less.

The implications in Sarah's past are frightening. I find your prose very descriptive and cadence easy flowing. I have enjoyed what you wrote so far; please update soon.

Innogen

Very good. Please update soon!

Very good writing technique! Great plot, i cant think of anything better than that! keep it up! :)

i love it update real soon=)

Great story so far! Please hurry and update soon! I wanna know who raped Sarah!

Whoa, I wonder what's going on. Whatever it is, it can't be good. I hope Jareth does decide to visit her again. Even though he thinks she doesn't need him, it's obvious she does.

very well done. I hope you continue writing this one.

This is a REALLY REALLY good story!! It's not over yet is it?? Because I wouldn't mind a few more chapters!! Keep up the good work!! =)
LifE

OMG OMG OMG! this story is awesome! please update soon!

this story is so good! but i'm waiting to find out who raped sarah. plz keep writing!

Aw... I love Jareth when he's being all sweet like that!! it's great cause i like nice people!! well update soon and I hope that theres more J/S.

He definitely couldn't be any more wrong about Sarah not needing him. I hope he decides to visit her to find out. Or something.