Reviews for The Price of Our Legacy

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Yvonne 2008-04-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseWow! Top class Danny whumping! Stunning, very well written - had to read it all in one sitting.
JEM515 2007-04-22 ch 4,	abuseI love this story. This was actually one of the first fanfiction stories I ever read- about 3 years ago? I think you took Evolution to a dramatic place that TPTB missed.
chiclete 2007-03-05 ch 4,	abusePerfect!
Pipsy 2006-07-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseI read this forever ago but I remembered it was such a good story. You really had me concerned for Daniel's life there for a moment! (Heart attack!) A little off the subject, but I'm fan of your site- your music videos in particular. Um. WOW! I can't get '45' out of my head now. Anyway, thanks for all your great stuff, fic and vids alike. Hope to see more of both!
Rebel Goddess 2006-04-15 ch 4,	abuseHaving to read and write at the same time because I can't cope with waiting to review: You can't mean it. You can't. Tell me it's just Dead Again Daniel dying and coming back. "One guerrilla..two guerillas... three guirrellas dead" made me smile. I'm a bit beyond laughing - too scared. Loved your twist. See. I knew it. D-A-Daniel wasn't DA really. I absolutely adored your Alexandre Dumas reference. This line and its preceeding thoughts brought me about as close to devastation as any story I've read that didn't involve major character death "And the civilian…who saved the world with his soul". The parts in italics had me literally wanting to cry. Seriously glorious story. Right, I give in, I can't tell you how good this was. You'll just have to imagine my face as I sit here at 10 to 1 in the morning and just go "Nyuh..." Words left me about an hour ago, so I can only say: Truly amazing story. The prose was transcendent. I hope you write professionally because you need to get more credit than a few feedback cookies for this. Otherwise just know that you have given one person at least a huge amount of pleasure in reading.
Rebel Goddess 2006-04-15 ch 3,	abuseIn the midst of the beautiful angst, you made me giggle when you wrote "Pushing aside the disgust that he would, yet again, need to unpack all his stuff and, yet again, need to find a new place to live after, yet again, coming back from the dead" and I laughed again at Jack asking Teal'c if the Jaffa needed a hug. The Macgyver joke was also great. Jack's little speech took me by surprise - I was looking for a quote citation until I realised it wasn't a quote but an original. I was with Daniel on the hit your head thing. Damn it, that ending was mean. Wow. Again and again and again.
Rebel Goddess 2006-04-15 ch 2,	abuseThe part on Abydos was heartbreaking. Oh hell, artefact? That can't be good. I loved Sha'uri "weighing her existence with each breath he took". Way, way too sad. Jack's determination is superb.
Rebel Goddess 2006-04-15 ch 1,	abuseI had to laugh at the puppy imagery, and Daniel's idea to get the lizard to "Go find Jack". Lassie it isn't. Loved the schedule too. Regurgitated archaeologist and Angels 101 both had me giggling and wincing at the same time. Gibran really knows what he's talking about, some of the time at least. I actually felt physically sick when I was reading the line "And with a sudden agonising jolt..." because I knew what was about to be so wrong. I love the Mummy too. Apophis Bobble-head made me giggle no end. I can just believe Teal'c snickered, and the mental image made me snicker. The best bit had to be DID-AR and DIT-AR though. Oh, the DID-AR better have not have just gone off. Wonderful beginning.
new creation 2005-07-06 ch 4,	abuseYour stories are amazing! Please keep writing them.
Rinne 2005-06-02 ch 4,	abuseWow. I'm speechless.
Shimagami 2004-06-12 ch 4,	abuseI think I love you... even though I almost had a heart attack while reading this. Awesome story, you wrote it so well. And I loved the way you played off that one episode. Though the moment you said that Daniel had died I wanted to kill someone, of course I then found out your brilliant plan to make the reader sit at the edge of their seats. Bloody hell, that was a heart killer. I think I'm gonna need therapy. Did I mention that I officialy love you and this stoy? anyway I love you. ~Shimagami >__
RUpuzzled2? 2004-05-06 ch 4, anon.	abusethis was a really good story. one of the best i ever read!
normilou 2004-04-24 ch 1,	abuseWow!! I'm loving the story so far. I think you have nailed the characters personalities. I'm giggling at some of the dialog. At the same time you do a good job of keeping me worried and on edge with the angst factor. Please keep writing!
Rioko Avalon 2004-04-24 ch 4, anon.	abuseI loved this story. I applaud you for the insight to humanity's many masks. Only certain people could pull it off so well. Half way through the last chapter I was so very relieved. Your finess of pulling the last chapter off was simply increadible.It was so very emotional; it pulled me in and didn't want to let me go. And at the same time I didn't want it to either.
Ali 2004-04-18 ch 4, anon.	abuseA fascinating story that demands attention and concentration, but rewards the reader immensely. I liked the flashbacks and 'dream sequences' particularly Daniel's with Sha're. I loved the Jack and Daniel banter, and really liked the Jack you presented here. The hug with Sam was great and totally comradely rather than the yuck J/S UST stuff we've been forced fed lately on the show, while the offered hug to Teal'c was hilarious. Daniel was his usual wonderful, resilient, courageous self, sure of his team, but knowing that while they'd never leave him, they might not get to him in time. I regretted Dr Lee's demise, and I found Cornelius' behaviour and motives sadly all too believable. I read the quotations after then story, I have to admit, yet they too added depth. Thanks for an excellent read. Ali

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