That was a fun read. The nuke scene is pretty traumatic, which is the point I gather. It flowed well, and the time shift was nice. Nice bit with their daughter, except you didn't describe her. Oh well.

Nice add to that story.

Heather

cool

Nice to see your still writing. Its an interesting take on things. I assume that timeline wise this would be the initial timeline that changed to the one in your tunnel vision story. Anyway I hope this means we'll be seeing more of your work in the future.

A good history as ever. I like it. But more that a sidestory it look a new look to your Sailor Ranko: Tunnel Vision.
I suppose that this is a One-shoot.
Congratulations
Kinai.

Nice gritty feel to it. The time change bit
feels off tho'. Too quick.

Neat! Loved the transition at the end. 'Just an odd feeling' No-chan? As in Nodoka-chan? Nice to see Sailor Sun isn't affected by her powers, as some others have suggested. Bring on the rest!

Very good, but dark. I do not like dark. There are enough dark in real life...

It sure was pretty dark but then you have to expect that from a terminator cross fic. I can tell you're writing has improved since I went back and re-read Tunnel Vision last night. Maybe i'll ask again later but i was wondering if you could explain the timeline around this one. How is it that jupiter and io got mixed up with connar when that timeline happened before they were reborn? I'm sure you've got an explination though. You've gotten me drooling for more.

Heh, good addition. Make T2 dependent on the Sailor Senshi. This was well written, as usual. Keep up the good work.