 Luceid 2005-12-15 . chapter 1Oh...jab jab! |
 MornMeril 2004-10-27 . chapter 1ver very well written! i liked it very much! so bitterweet and great use of words!
i would love to read more.
bst wishes |
 sugahcat 2004-10-24 . chapter 1It's been a long time since I visited I figured I should go review some of my favourite author's fics... And man, there's a lot of 'em :) I liked this for many reasons. Firstly it's so terribly bittersweet. And second (and most important) Remus gets his own back. I always thought he shouldv'e. |
 Brushy 2004-07-23 . chapter 1 Well done! I love how sentimental it is! It made my stomach clench and it made me cry at the end.
Again, Good job! |
 Rocky Vladimir 2004-03-20 . chapter 1This is wickedly brilliant and has a fresh flavor of irony to it. |
 MystikalRedRose 2004-03-15 . chapter 1Aww thats so sad...poor severus...is there anoter chapter to this...please let there be..i want to know if severus get remus back..its sad..
Update soon
Traci |
 Maki 2004-03-09 . chapter 1 I like the bittersweetness here. Nice twist at the end. I've read your recent fics here and there and like them even better than your old ones; because your characterization got deeper and smoother. |
 Nikufei 2004-03-09 . chapter 1wow! very sentimantal!
is there gonna be a next chap? |
 lilypurewhite 2004-03-09 . chapter 1This was very nice, even with the odd formatting probelms. I was hoping that FF.net had finally gotten things straightened around! |
 The Cleric 007 (too lazy to sign in) 2004-03-09 . chapter 1 Wow...that was very nice. Bittersweet. I like it a lot, especially the ending. "Don't use words you don't understand." Very nice indeed.
You may want to look at the formatting though. For some reason, your disclaimer and warnings are at the end of the story, and also your HTML tags aren't working.
But even with formatting errors, it is still a lovely story. Good job :) |