Nice Story

awesome~
I don't think it needs betaing...
x3
just need more.
Me. i need more. End of story.
...or not...
eh, stupid pun.
^^

Ah, I got here too late :) I would have offered to beta-read, except that I'm -- five years too late, and you've probably moved onto new fandoms already. Still, for the two chapters that you've written, thanks for conveying so much emotion and creating good fodder for imagination. I've enjoyed reading it immensely, and I especially enjoy the dialogue you've written between Touya and Yuki, and your Touya-voice.

Poor touya.

Please write more. i would like to know what happens next. :)

This had a lot of promise, it's a shame it was abandoned. Even in the two chapters we get though there are some great insights into what could be going on between the two of them after the power transfer. The bit about the guy at the 7-11 having minor fire magic was great. I started to feel like this world was connected with other fictons where magically gifted people wander around "normal" Tokyo.

Oh dear... it's so sad to stumble across such a wonderful fanfic only to find it hasn't updated in four years... I don't suppose you have any plans to revive it? I would dearly like to know what happens.

It´s a shame, really, that I always enter the Card Captor Sakura section hoping to see this fanfic updated. If you´re still interested (and you´ll be kind enough to tell me what it consists on) I´ll be happy to help you with your beta reader situation. If that is the reason why you stopped, that is...

Oh this is really good. I would so beta read if my grammar didn't suck so much. Is the next chapter going to come out anytime soon? Touya/yukito are just so cute together.

Wow. I think this fic really has potential to go somewhere... unfortunately it hasn't been updated in about 3 years so I won't get my hopes up... but very nice job on what you do have written! :)

hurry up and update!! crap that sounded bossy and really mean didnt it?/...what i mean to say is please hurry up with your next chapter so i can read it...this has to be one of the best stories iv read in a while ^^

Yay Another relly awesome Fan fic! I'd offer to beta read except my spelling and grammer are relly bad so I would'nt be doing you any favors.

Ai wanta more! Please write more! Lotsa luv, more To-ya and Yuki, and Yue!

i like your story! update soon ya? ;p

I like it! Please write more soon!

please continued.