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| creativeexpressions 2007-10-05 ch 6,  | abuseOh my god...update needed NOW NOW NOW!! You write amazingly well, even the little detials just add to the picture...MEGA HOT!! I'm sure I'm not alone in imagining that I was Sarah!! ;) |
| notwritten 2007-09-19 ch 4, | abuseinterestingly good |
| notwritten 2007-09-19 ch 3, | abuseinteresting chapter |
| notwritten 2007-09-19 ch 2, | abusevery interesting |
| notwritten 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abusevery good |
| Kaline Reine 2007-09-19 ch 6, | abuseOMG, this is too funny. Why does she never believe he's real in any of the stories? Lol. I can't wait for the next chapter, this is a good story. -K.R. |
| Kaline Reine 2007-09-19 ch 4, | abuseHaha, that was a neat chapter. Joy reminds me of myself! -K.R. |
| Kaline Reine 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love this story already. I am going to have to read the rest of it. The first chapter, and what you said about how she created her friends in the Labyrinth, made so much sense! I like this, it's interesting. I kind of thought the same thing b/c at the ned of the movie she said that she needed all of them in your life, for no reason at all. Confusing, but true... Thank you for writing this! -Kaline Reine |
| WhiteInfinity21 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is good! keep it up! |
| dansemacabre 2007-09-19 ch 6, | abuseHey, you updated! :) My memory is simply terrible, I had to reread from the beginning before I looked at your new chapters. Chapter 5... hot. And very naughty. I love the voyeuristic angle of that chapter. It's a natural extension on what took place in the movie, with Jareth and his crystal-gazing, and it made sense that eventually he'd see something not meant for a G-rated audience. In chapter 6, I do question the idea that Sarah's _first_ instinct is not to hide her nakedness, because that seems like such an instinctual reaction in most people that even a short delay seems odd. Love the Goblin King's opening dialogue though, and his actions are all very him! |
| maiden-of-dreams 2006-12-26 ch 4, | abusePlease post soon. This is a great story and very original. |
| personwithnoname 2005-10-29 ch 4, | abuseplease update! :] |
| tiddlywinks 2005-08-19 ch 4, | abuseI quite like the premise of this story... a little different at least from the usual "Sarah is in danger and wishes herself away/Sarah is wished away by a friend OR Karen OR Toby/umm why do we need a reason Jareth is hot enough just to turn up on his own? Also *eyebrow-eyebrow* sex magic hey? Must keep that in mind for future reference... |
| BlackAngelBlood 2005-02-16 ch 4, | abuse*glares murderiously at OutInTheStorm* and why haven't u updated yet? Hm i mean some people here would like to know what happens next...lol. J/P anyways love the way u made Joy(i'm a goth and i'm dating one of our schools pride and joy football players) anyways went of topic like usually please update as soon as you can i want to know whats going to happen next. Je Ne Raven |
| Lian Ryu 2004-11-12 ch 2, | abuseo_0 ... the famous last words were uttered.. "but what can it hurt?" ... yep I think that rumbling noise that sounds like a stampede is Destiny comming in to trample our intrepid chracters... *grins* |