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Reviews For: The Face in the Picture

jjjs
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseWhat the hell? Why did u stop here? I enjoyed this and the previous one. Please combine them both and its continuation into one story and publish it right away! Thank you for your help.
Dieu Anonyme
2006-02-19
ch 1,
abuseUm...

Huh?

That's it? Man, you're evil... That really the end? Cause it's really confusing... You have to realise people are dying to know what happens next. And you're not really a meanie, are you now? So... you could write a sequel you know... Have things cleared up a bit and all, whaddaya say? Hmm?

Alright so you're the one who decides, but a girl gotta try, right? Anyway that was really good. Strange, but good :)

- YB

P.S. LOVED the scarf-sniffing moment. :D
GreenVixen
2006-01-30
ch 1,
abuse:O the ending waz so mean! tho so good i loved it ^^ thr better be a continuation tho -_- lolz keep up the good work ciao
keisan
2005-12-19
ch 1,
abuseWhat?! That's it? What happened?? I must know what happened! I liked it but it's not done.
cyle
2005-08-13
ch 1,
abusesplendid! marvellous! fantatstic! positively riveting!stupendous! phenomenal! sensational! egregious! ...? there is just one tiny, insignificant problem which i am confident you will see too immediately. where is the sequel? ...
there is no sequel?
GA
*promptly throws herself off the astronomy tower*
ps: continue on conquering the darkness. waiting for chapter 12 was torture. good work!
Chatwyn
2004-12-08
ch 1,
abuseYou so cannot leave it there. That's a very very cruel thing to do. ...Oh God, it was getting so good too, the atmosphere was *perfect*, the tension was all built and just *waiting* to explode, and... you leave us hanging RIGHT THERE! That can't be good for anyone's health.

This would be a perfect example of a UST fic. Please, please -please- write a sequel or something. With preferably a happy, hopeful ending (sequel's no good if it makes everyone depressed). Please, we BEG of you.

Don't do this to us.
SimplyTurquoise
2004-03-15
ch 1,
abuse*sputter* what do you mean fin?!!? that was not an ending- i repeat, NOT an ending...
Global Thrasher
2004-03-10
ch 1,
abuseInsanely good
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