that chapter was grate especialy the part about cloud.. if you dont already have the game kindom hearts 2 and you really want it then to see cool sneek peek music clips of it like the one ime listning to now go to google and type in kingdome hearts 2 music videoes and go the first or third thing you shuld see is the word putfile and something else look at the discription and it should say something about kingdome hearts 2 music videos

Yeah! Two chapters down, eight to go! I'm really starting to like this story alot:) I review in a few more chapters.

That was really good! Sora seems a tiny bit OOCish but thats fine. I'll review again after I read the next chapter:)

POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!POST!

Are ya gonna now?

Love your story. Can't wait for an upsate.

please continue OR ELSE YOU WILL DIE!(JUST KIDDING)

I haven't gotten very far on this, but I really like what I'm reading! ^_^ Nice work!

~Ami

*Blinks* Yah. XD I love this fic. I like the idea, more Riku ness please ! ^^;; Lub your fic, don't give up !

Hey,Sora is OCC,but come on... He in this fiction he is an actor.
I see this Sora like a person,and Canon!Sora as another one.
Canon!Sora is more cheerfull,this one,is more insecure.Even cute.
I loved the fiction,and loved the way that you putted.
UPDATE.NOW.

oh! I hav a short attention span today but this managed 2 keep me interested! well done!im really loving this plot, so keep ya chin up, ur doing great. I would really love to know how the whole cloud thing works out, it's realy good tht u made a massive contrast between Coliseum guy and Sora's Dad.

Yay, another update! Keep it going, I really like this. Need to know what happens.

you update YAY I'm so happy I've been waiting for you to update for so long and so happy you did, I hope you keep going with this story cause its so good.

Sorry its taken me forever to review...its been...well a long story. And part of it is just my laziness. BUT! YAY! I loved the last line...and fight dad. Thats so great!

Are you gonna update this again?

The last two seemed a bit rushed. I wish you would have developed the areas. But hey, I hope you play out the Coliseum! I'll check back in and hope you've updated *crosses fingers*.

You UPDATED!! yay! Anyway it's still great, i really like this! Update soon.