That was really good!
Oh and for teh diea thing,
I think you should make them havea bar fight,
that would be sick!
If you like Humour, I would ask the favour of having you check out my new story When A Tales Come A Knockin which sort of pokes fun @ sues. with characters like Eragon, Pendragon, Darren Shan & Characters from my stories :)
Lemme know. ;)
Thanks!
` & Shayy ;

Very good:)
Love this!
Plz continue:)

DO THE BARS DO THE BARS

please update!

you can have larten meet Arra and have them fight on the bars and have arra totally kick his butt lol

Please update soon!
~*~vampblood101~*~

please write more!

Haha. So far the story's been great, I hope there'll be more. There is a perfect amount of humour on Larten's behalf. :)

Sarah x

UPDATE! It was wonderful mate!! Just keep it up and update soon!

OMFG! ONE OF THE ONLY AND I MEAN ONLY DARREN SHAN STORIES THAT I READ AND WAS ACTUALLY GREAT! all of the other stories suck!dude GREAT JOB! plz update!

LP

p.s. GREAT JOB!!

This is a really cool story! Where did you get the idea of doing one from Mr Crepsleys point?
Maybe in the next chapter you could have Larten and Gavner getting lost together without their mentors, and they have to fight a vampeneze, or a boar or something.

WOOHOO! I like this chapter, I read it the first day it was posted, but I forgot to review. oops.
Write more, you're taking to long.

This is a very cute story! I like it! It shows us a new side of Larten Crepsley I'm sure we all never thought we'd see. Update soon, and check out my story, All's Well that Ends Well.
byez,
Tira Midori

**Cheers** Yay! I like, I like!
One problem- the font it's too think, it's giving me a headache. But other then that it's great! Write more!