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| dragongirl-8507 2004-06-14 ch 10,  | abuseHey! ^_^ your story is really good! update soon! or...or.. i'll cain the whole team too chairs and make them watch tellitubies!! muhahahaha!! (please update.) |
| fenris-wolf 2004-06-14 ch 4, anon. | abusesorry but i cant keep the events in order now everything is just thrown in here and bunched together...youre still making hiei seem retarded and kurama wouldnt hit yusuke because its not in his character to do so but it is ur fic so i hope you keep writing and get better as for me im done with this one b/c i cant read it anymore. |
| fenris-wolf 2004-06-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseeh kurama beating up hiei? IMPOSSIBLE!! sheesh youre making hiei seem like a total wimp. other than that its fairly well written slightly rushed tho and she seems too perfect of an OC, as for what was said in the first chapter about her being a purely physical fighter itd be cool if you actually hung with that idea... |
| fenris-wolf 2004-06-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseneat except one question...did she actually shoot the spirit gun successfully when she tried it or what, because if she did that's kind of silly and ruins the point of training. |
| koshin 2004-05-07 ch 9, anon. | abusesounds good but finish this story before you continue with the one here |
| Kitsune Kit 2004-05-06 ch 8, | abuseOMYGAWD I loves it! Keep updateing! |
| Kitsune Kit 2004-05-06 ch 2, | abuseIt is good! keep updateing! |
| dragongirl-8507 2004-04-18 ch 8, | abuseHey I really like your story. keep writing. ^_^ I'm going to check it often. Lata! ^_^ |
| Han Futsu Anti Normal 2004-04-17 ch 8, | abuseDun dun dunn! ^^ This is gettin' GOOD! I wonder what Kurama said... I bet it was funny as hell ^^ |
| dragongirl-8507 2004-04-13 ch 3, | abuseHey good stoy keep it up |
| Sessha's Crazy 2004-04-01 ch 6, | abuseMORE SOON PLEASE! I love it! |
| Han Futsu Anti Normal 2004-03-26 ch 5, | abuse^^ |
| Sessha's Crazy 2004-03-16 ch 4, | abuse-_-+ *twitch* normally I'm very bouncy, but when people misspell a simple name like SESSHA twice in a row, i get a bit ticked (must come from people misspellig my REAL last name all the time *rants to crowd of misspelling people* REALLY! IS *I* ACTUALLY SO HARD TO REMEMBER! I NOT E! *people cower*) *calms down* sorry 'bout that! IT'S GOING GREAT SO FAR! Please UPDATE SOON! P.S. It might be easier to just say SC. I often refere to myself as such! P.P.S. Your appology is accepted! |
| Han Futsu Anti Normal 2004-03-15 ch 4, | abuseSo sweet! ^^ MYCHELA/KURAMA 4-EVA! ^.^ Squee |
| Crimson rose Sakura 2004-03-15 ch 2, | abusei was wondering if jin or touya is in this story? just a thought that you could have them in here. if so i could be paired withone... *smiles embarrassed* well anyways very good story! ima going to put it in my faves! |