This souds like a very intersting begining to a snarry fic, but of cource it is listed as complete.

Its a good little oneshot, quite introspective. However while I get Harry's part I don't quite get Snape's. Though the nerve to use the Occulemncy on Snape was groovy, didn't he(Snape) know or what?

"No doubt investigating the shady dealings of Knockturn Alley so that you might put a stop to them single-handedly." Just right.

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A sweet story - i would have liked more!

Lovely story.

This was a great one-shot. I'm glad to see that Severus is portrayed as caring for the students in his house. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more from you!

Love it! Excellent in-canon portrayal of Snape. Keep up the good work.

That was an excellent short fic! I love how you portrayed Snape. No one seems to understand the Slytherins, not even the Slytherins themselves, except for Severus. Even I thought it was cute when the Gryfs one the house cup in the 1st book (I was stupidly naive about it) but I soon realized how wrong it really was and you show the injustice really well! Wonderful story, Weasleygirl-ca.

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :)

Jan

Oh, I liked this, really! Pity it's "only" a one-shot, it would have made a nice longer fic, I think. I like the way you are writing about the care of Snape for "his" Slytherins... Although I don't think, Snape would be so easily "legilimensed", it made a very enjoyable little fic.. Great! :-)

That was nice. And again, I love it when its shown that Severus is protective over his young charges.

Are you sure this will remain as a one-shot? Its so good.

This such a great story. keep it going! I love these kinds of stories. If you need help or want to talk to me at all, you can email me at MioneGranger@mugglenet.com or/and my aim littlemissmiss23

Brilliant, this is truly brilliant. Are you going to continue it? I mean, the plot is wonderful, you've kept them in character and you're obviously a good writer. You should continue it, for it had potiental, really and you're a great writer. Brilliant! Please continue. E-mail if you are...or aren't. It get me off of waiting if you aren't.

This is cool! Update soon.