|Reviews for KinStrife|
| elenardas 4/15/07 . chapter 12
I am re-readind all yours stories. What a beautiful work ! Please, update...
| Raksha The Demon 4/23/06 . chapter 12
Alright, who is the bleeding, robed figure Imrahil sees dying in his vision? Please don't make us wait too many years for the answer - unless it's something I should know from the books, but I can't figure it out.
Curious to see that Imrahil and Aragorn are hitting it off with much more of a brotherly rapport than Imrahil and Denethor ever will have. Of course, Aragorn/Thorongil isn't courting Finduilas; but I imagine that Imrahil would be delighted if he were; since he practically begged the good Captain to do so in an earlier chapter.
Very good characterization of the future King; btw. His retrieval of Imrahil from the visions harkens to Aragorn's future retrieval of Faramir from the dark vale; the ability to call a trapped soul back to the waking world.
Update soon - pretty please?
| LOCISVU 4/4/06 . chapter 12
I can't believe I missed an update!
| NightEclipse 3/30/06 . chapter 12
Great story I love it! I must say that you write very good. But I am curious about the next chapter so please write again soon.
| Kate Swynford 3/29/06 . chapter 3
I'm reading it and loving it! It really took me a long time to get into your Dol Amroth stories, but now I see that I've been missing a great read.
| WanderingAlbatros 3/23/06 . chapter 12
I was waiting and hoping for this for a long long time! A new chapter of "Kin-strife"! Great!
Your characterization of Imrahil and Aragorn is so perfectly "tolkienish", I love it! Did I understand right? Imrahil wants to swear fealty to his uncrowned king? Wow, great idea!
Always hopefully and eagerly awaiting your next update,
| Pink Kryptonite 3/22/06 . chapter 12
Not long enough, but good. Another chapter setting up fun chapters to come, I am afraid. Love the Thorongil, need more action. Glad for an update, will be waiting for more... :)
| Angainawen of Ithilien 2/28/05 . chapter 11
Izzie Baby! WHERE ARE YOU! Valar above! Your fans are worried about you! I LOVE absolutely LOVE this story (Andra is the sexiest homosexual ever!) Yet the world is soo worried that you have died or worse *gasp* gave up on the cause! Please say life hasn't taken you away from us! You are like a mentor to me! Please, please, please write soon! We all need you!
| Aramel 9/5/04 . chapter 10
Ooh, Imrahil's being diplomatic in chapter 10, isn't he? I laughed my anatomy off at the way he cornered the Haradrim lord whatever-he's-called. And *cough* Andra's *cough* cute. :D And so's Imrahil.
| LOCISVU 9/4/04 . chapter 11
That was really nice for the two of them to take that oath.
| Cornelia 9/3/04 . chapter 11
wonderful chapter! The oath between Imri and Andra, the call upon the Sacred Fire and Manwe - and the reaction afterwards...wow!
And then "Thorongil" ...now we know why he was so sure he could bring back Faramir, Eowyn and Merry *g*. And "My Lord...Captain", its very clear what Imrahil really was going to say. I think he has seen the same Faramir has seen in the Houses of Healing, when he was Called. And his "old family recipe for bad headaches" - now I am sitting beside my chair because of a laughing fit, and you are the one to blame for it!
Perhaps Andrahar should be warned - when Lurtz tried to throw a knife after Aragorn, we know what happened - head-chopping, very unfortunately for Lurtz! OK, thats movie-verse, but I couldnt resist. *g*
| Radbooks 9/3/04 . chapter 11
Thorongil to the rescue! That was cool having him coming in all dripping wet to save Imrahil. And now Andrahar owes him... hmm wonder if that will ever come into play in some other story. ;) Very nicely done chapter!
| Lady Berenice 9/3/04 . chapter 11
Great, as usual. I love how each and every one of your characters and their relationships with each other, no matter how minor, has been drawn with such fine and careful detail, with heaps of 'backstory' that's only hinted at - Fin and Andra and the ongoing beheading saga to name just one. If you're doing more flashbacks, please can we have one with her reaction the first time that Andra does his whole kneeling-and-asking-to-be-beheaded thing? Imri's acting abilities are wonderful, as always - he's reminding me more and more of an all-the-optional-extras frat boy - a huge amount of fun to be around, and no doubt great at a party, but also intelligent, compassionate and loyal.
| Infinitys-End 9/2/04 . chapter 11
Hurrah! I love the blood-brother ceremony. Of course, this chapter is only making me love Andra more, and feeds my desire for more stories with Andra. Very well done.
| Raksha The Demon 9/2/04 . chapter 11
Another fine chapter. I have to wonder if Imrahil now knows that "Thorongil" is the forgotten King of Gondor, he seemed unusually deferential to the good Captain after waking.