For some reason, this chapter made me cry. T_T;

I love it none the less though. I really feel sorry for Seph, not being able to experience proper childhood and all. Only seeing the sun and the star for the first time at the age of 6. T_T

This was too good! I'm sad that it's over. I was sad when it came to Sephiroth and his experiments with death but Zack was there to make me smile so I liked it. That guy is so funny. XD Anyway, good job on this fic and congrats on getting it completed! :D

This one made me twitch a little. It was well written though. I just think the content freaked me out a little. Anyway, good job.

O_O Was NOT expecting that! That was so... AWESOME! XD I loved it. It was so sweet and sad that I got teary-eyed. Poor Sephiroth, he was so shocked that he had no idea how to react. Cute! Very good job with this one!

XD Sephiroth is so evil! I love it. Perhaps I should get him to get back at all my evil teachers. :evil grin: Anyway, my favorite part was when he thought about Hojo and not being able to hold it for long. XD Priceless. Good job!

This was a nice one. It makes you feel like helping the young child to see/feel the sun. Great job on this one.

XD That was a great read! I enjoyed myself very much. I love Baby Sephiroth. He has good aim! XD And Gast is just a total sweetheart. Great job!

Awesome fic!!
i was pleasantly surprised about the rape. like you
said in your final notes, he's rarely seen doing anything
as extreme as that. Due to the advent fans. GOOD JOB.

Wow. This is psychologically scary. I can feel the same emotions as the main character. If I were to position myself in that same environment and such, I honestly can't say I wouldn't do the same What a great story! I like your portrayal of Sephiroth's back story. Very nice, very eloquent. Simply said; More. Soon.

I felt sick in the beginning. I still ell that way but less in the end. I can't say I like what is written. But I like what you wanted to do in this chap (all that blood and the surrounding of torture is too much. If it wasn't for curiosity toward your young Seph I wouldn't be here.

It is so deep I nealy cried. i don't like slash but in this case, it was very nice reading and feeling. After all, no on esaid that Seph considerationg such an option.

it is so cute. Well Done Seph ! Poor mice running everywhere! ^^

I truly LOVE each of them ! these chaps are too nice to read and to live. Thank you for this.

Maybe you are "not as disturbing as [you] feared," but this piece can certainly be classified as disturbing. It takes real insight to portray such horror in such a realistic fashion. The part that makes it disturbing is not merely the subject matter, but rather that you draw the audience in so that emotional distance is not an option. The question in my mind is this: what horrors exist even deeper in your creative dungeons, that these are only a first effort at exploring?

Hee hee hee hee hee...