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AmeliaMC
2009-04-04 . chapter 12
*pets Ved* Aw poor baby! Jack can have him back when he apologizes.
AmeliaMC
2009-03-08 . chapter 10
Jack should totally go all alpha male on Ved! OMG that would be so HOT.
AmeliaMC
2009-02-26 . chapter 9
Dun dun DUN!
Ryo-Hellsing
2009-02-21 . chapter 8
Can't wait to see what happens to Mega and Jack!
AmeliaMC
2009-02-19 . chapter 8
Mega's super creepy. I hope Ved knocks some sense into Jackie.
LucaLight
2009-02-04 . chapter 7
omg! you've completely thrown me for a loop! I mean, I knew Ved would be mad at Jack but I didn't know Jack would change so drastically...and Bray! WOW!
LucaLight
2009-01-31 . chapter 6
:-O! Jack joined the Technos?! What's gonna happened to him and Ved?! What will happen between him and the Mallrats?! omg, please update soon!
AmeliaMC
2009-01-31 . chapter 6
Aww! Poor Jack. Can't wait to see what happens!
Ryo-Hellsing
2008-08-28 . chapter 4
Haha love it
Please keep going!
SwingDancer
2008-07-05 . chapter 5
I love it please update it
LucaLight
2008-06-08 . chapter 5
*gasp* Jack! Ved! what happened! I'm confused! Well, not about Jack but I am about Ved. I love it :D there really should be more Jack/Ved stories.
dbzfannr1
2007-09-24 . chapter 4
Pleaz uploud this story son! I love it! :D
dbzfannr1
2007-09-24 . chapter 2
Nice chapter!! :D
Roselle Greywood
2007-08-07 . chapter 4
Jack seems quite out of character. I noticed it at the point when Ved came in when Jack was getting a drink in the first chapter. Just thought I'd point that out. Apart from that, I'm liking how you weave series 4 events into their relationship and how it develops. :)
LucaLight
2007-08-02 . chapter 4
I loved this chapter, so adorable. I can't wait to see what lies ahead for them.
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