 AmeliaMC 2009-04-04 . chapter 12*pets Ved* Aw poor baby! Jack can have him back when he apologizes. |
 AmeliaMC 2009-03-08 . chapter 10Jack should totally go all alpha male on Ved! OMG that would be so HOT. |
 AmeliaMC 2009-02-26 . chapter 9Dun dun DUN! |
 Ryo-Hellsing 2009-02-21 . chapter 8Can't wait to see what happens to Mega and Jack! |
 AmeliaMC 2009-02-19 . chapter 8Mega's super creepy. I hope Ved knocks some sense into Jackie. |
 LucaLight 2009-02-04 . chapter 7omg! you've completely thrown me for a loop! I mean, I knew Ved would be mad at Jack but I didn't know Jack would change so drastically...and Bray! WOW! |
 LucaLight 2009-01-31 . chapter 6:-O! Jack joined the Technos?! What's gonna happened to him and Ved?! What will happen between him and the Mallrats?! omg, please update soon! |
 AmeliaMC 2009-01-31 . chapter 6Aww! Poor Jack. Can't wait to see what happens! |
 Ryo-Hellsing 2008-08-28 . chapter 4Haha love it
Please keep going! |
 SwingDancer 2008-07-05 . chapter 5I love it please update it |
 LucaLight 2008-06-08 . chapter 5*gasp* Jack! Ved! what happened! I'm confused! Well, not about Jack but I am about Ved. I love it :D there really should be more Jack/Ved stories. |
 dbzfannr1 2007-09-24 . chapter 4 Pleaz uploud this story son! I love it! :D |
 dbzfannr1 2007-09-24 . chapter 2 Nice chapter!! :D |
 Roselle Greywood 2007-08-07 . chapter 4Jack seems quite out of character. I noticed it at the point when Ved came in when Jack was getting a drink in the first chapter. Just thought I'd point that out. Apart from that, I'm liking how you weave series 4 events into their relationship and how it develops. :) |
 LucaLight 2007-08-02 . chapter 4I loved this chapter, so adorable. I can't wait to see what lies ahead for them. |