please write more soon!
its grweat...im dying for more

I like your fan fic, its cynical, yet funny at the same time o.O like one of those..THINGS. yea *weird look* keep up with the good work

I like this chapter. But I really want to know where this is going. I want to know if she's going to get worse? Get better. You should totally write more. Heh. Please continue.

Woot! Another chapter! How much do I love this story? THIS MUCH!

Omg I love this story so much. Its kind of not good for me to read because it is making me so sad. Keep up the amazing work, I love this story!!

This seems interesting so far ... it's not written with a lot of dialog and it uses what is actually happening and her own opinion interchangably. Good work so far ... although it is a little cynical ...

I really like your ff, I think you are going a great job from Ellie's POV. I read your other one (the companion to this one) and really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!

yay! you FINALLY updated! rejoice! *trows party.* oh, yeah, BTW, this is emma. i got an s/n, finally. yay! :D

that was really good i like how you play out ellie

Yay, you finally updated! It was kinda confusing to me, but I'm stupid, so it's all good. Please write more soon, because I love the way you capture Ellie in this story, very beliveble. And, I like the shrugging thing, totally awsome.

“It’s a boy!”

Shrug.

Its OK... take your time.

Wow! This chapter was GREAT! I sure wasn't explactng this! This is better than what I explaceted. Anyways, please try to update when you can!

Later!

Great chapter. Ellie's thoughts are like in a drunken daze even though for the first half of the chapter, she's not drunk. I love it. Gosh, I love it.

more perfection writen by you.

dylan is soo straight forward it ** me off sometimes...
love how she took the lead and kissed him, and the nose piercing tres cute

UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ!