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| Hidari 2006-07-31 ch 1,  | abuseSo very beautiful! *sigh* |
| Withdrawn 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome, one of the best fics I've ever read. I'm actually most impressed you could write a fic like that and NOT have them feel at all OOC. Very nice. |
| Jindai-Ikari 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! Please write more :) |
| Naon Tiotami 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseSleep! (*falls asleep*) Good story. Now I need to read the other two stories... Cheerio, Naon |
| BPE Exeter 2004-02-13 ch 1, | abuseOne of the staples of the EVA fan fiction universe, the string of tales both including and following this story are among the most endearing and skillfully written pieces to come out of the realm of Anime fan fiction. The characters are totally in character and dramatic situations are always lightened by the inner conflicts of the shifting narrator's points of view. Huang is truly the father of the in character Shinji/Asuka pairing and, along with the Alain Gravel, leads the way in terms of balancing serene narrative with strong, consist character interaction and development |
| Maeko 2003-06-02 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Thanks for writing it. |
| frograss 2003-04-22 ch 1, | abuseYou could feel the emotion in that one. Excellent WAFFINESS. Ha Ha. |
| PukiPuki 2002-08-14 ch 1, | abuseMy compliments. Asuka is by far my favorite character in Eva - I think she had a very complex personality, past, etc. - and I was hoping you'd be able to put this to good use. You sure as hell did. You captured her character, and Shinji's as well. I too have written many a sappy scenes between the "couple" so I can relate a bit to your fic. Not really...Yeah... .......... ...::crickets::.... |
| Jho 2002-03-11 ch 1, | abuseFantastic :) |
| Demonic-Engel 2001-10-03 ch 1, | abuseVery Good |
| SxStrngSamurai13 2001-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is defintely one of the classic NGE fanfic's out there. Good, GREAT stuff ;) |
| aeyta 2001-05-08 ch 1, | abusei love this fanfic. |
| BrodySTFU 2001-04-11 ch 1, | abuseOoooh.. I love it... So sad... *sniffles* |
| diskincluded 2001-03-10 ch 1, | abuse |
| Worldmage 2001-02-12 ch 1, | abuseNo spelling or grammatical errors detected; some general polishing was needed though... eg "it is the whisper that has" could be written as "the whisper has" with 1.the virtue of brevity and 2.no loss of meaning. And Shinji was uncharacteristically assertive. Other than that... wow. I'ts a reminder why your fics are some of the standards for the fandom. That's enough well-written WAFF right there to supply a legion for a week. |