So very beautiful! *sigh*

Awesome, one of the best fics I've ever read. I'm actually most impressed you could write a fic like that and NOT have them feel at all OOC. Very nice.

That was awesome! Please write more :)

Sleep! (*falls asleep*)

Good story. Now I need to read the other two stories...

Cheerio,

Naon

One of the staples of the EVA fan fiction universe, the string of tales both including and following this story are among the most endearing and skillfully written pieces to come out of the realm of Anime fan fiction. The characters are totally in character and dramatic situations are always lightened by the inner conflicts of the shifting narrator's points of view. Huang is truly the father of the in character Shinji/Asuka pairing and, along with the Alain Gravel, leads the way in terms of balancing serene narrative with strong, consist character interaction and development

Lovely. Thanks for writing it.

You could feel the emotion in that one. Excellent WAFFINESS. Ha Ha.

My compliments. Asuka is by far my favorite character in Eva - I think she had a very complex personality, past, etc. - and I was hoping you'd be able to put this to good use. You sure as hell did. You captured her character, and Shinji's as well. I too have written many a sappy scenes between the "couple" so I can relate a bit to your fic. Not really...Yeah...

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...::crickets::...

Fantastic :)

Very Good

This is defintely one of the classic NGE fanfic's out there. Good, GREAT stuff ;)

i love this fanfic.

Ooooh.. I love it... So sad... *sniffles*

No spelling or grammatical errors detected; some general polishing was needed though... eg "it is the whisper that has" could be written as "the whisper has" with 1.the virtue of brevity and 2.no loss of meaning. And Shinji was uncharacteristically assertive. Other than that... wow. I'ts a reminder why your fics are some of the standards for the fandom. That's enough well-written WAFF right there to supply a legion for a week.