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| Withdrawn 2006-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseNice, I don't really know what to say, but, it just felt...Good. You know? Like it pushed all the right buttons and hit all the right nails, but I can't tell how it was good. It just sort of...was. |
| Naon Tiotami 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseMore! Need more! (in other words, I like it) Cheerio, Naon |
| Hidari 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my, this is wonderful! I love your story. The way you brought Shinji and Asuka together was beautiful, I can just see it happening. |
| Danny 2003-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice fic you have here. I really like it. Keep on writing High Hopes Here Danny |
| Maeko 2003-06-02 ch 1, | abuseYeah, good choice not to have them be mushy yet. I think that this is more meaningful than a lot of kissing scenes I've read are. I really like this fic- keep up the fantabulous work! |
| PukiPuki 2002-08-14 ch 1, | abusePhew. That was excellent, as always. The only grammatical errors I could find were a few misplacements of "italics," but only toward the beginning of this fic. Great job with character capturing again, and, like you said, I'm glad you didn't rush anything between Asuka and Shinji. Time to read the third one... |
| Jho 2002-03-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story. |
| diskincluded 2001-03-10 ch 1, | abuse |
| Weltall_Elite 2001-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sniff* Beautiful! I love these WAFF stories. But I also think they shouldn't be forced. You did a nice job there. Good job! I hope to read more Shinji/Asuka fics from you! |
| Worldmage 2001-02-12 ch 1, | abuseAgain good construction; only some minor polishing needed. No OOC problems here, granting that Shinji can really change so quickly. I especially like your treatment of Misato as a serious character... in some ways, she's shortchanged by NGE itself. The character interactions were overly dramatic at times, but in general I wish I could write so well. |
| Shinji Ikari 2001-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm a lucky guy. Kensuke and Touji will be Jealos heheh. Nice fic |
| GRUD 2001-01-16 ch 1, | abuseVery good, very cool. Excellent work, again. You're another of those rare authors who can make his readers actually FEEL for the characters. You convey emotions VERY well, and tell a dman good story,also. Keep up the SUPERB writing. I'm off to read part 3. C ya'! |
| GuessWho009 2001-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've read this trilogy at least half a dozen times, and I still love it. When's that 4th part coming out? Now that graduation is over, how about using that extra free time to delve into the Shinji-Asuka-Misato relationship? Most fanfics don't really explore the interactions between them (usually, they just portray Misato as a drunk). |
| Spook777 2001-01-15 ch 1, | abuseHmm...So the talented and reclusive Andrew Huang decides to reveal himself at last. Good job. |