This story is good! Nice job you've done! I'm gonna read what happens after this now. Oh yea, thanks for reviewing my story by the way, I changed my title. . Must be typing too fast.
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It was very good, but there's one thing that I didn't understand...wasn't Kai hurt? Wasn't he...wounded badly? Argh, the horror! please continue? please? pretty please? If you do, mail to please and if you don't...do the same thing, but I wanna know something okay? great ficcie, exellent!

I'm so sorry that I reviewed this late, but I was punished because my bro threw a knife at me... Well, it was truly a very good chapter, can't wait to read the next one

(Sighs) Maxi didn't die. Good.
Cameron: Dranzer tried to kill him again, though.
Clio: Hehe. This was great, and pretty dramatic. I feel kind of sorry for Paine though.
Cameron: And the A/N at the end was hilarious.
Bye for now! (My shift key works again!)

maxi1
cliff; sorry, shes a total max fangirl. and our shift and caps lock keys are broken, the ones represent exclamation marks.
continue soon please, we both love it1

Nice...however it's not like Kai to be so afraid of someone, especially someone who's not that much of a threat to him. Great chapter though! Keep writing!
-Silens Letum

Lovely second chapter! Just as good as the first one. Great job!
-silens letum

v nicely written. Great storyline. I see definate talents here. Keep it up! However, I suggest that you look over your stories on the net. Some conversations are getting jumbled. I'm sure it not your fault, but I suggest that you go over it and correct it. - Other than that, great job! Keep it up!
-Silens Letum

I laughed my head of with the A/N lolz
No, this chapter was really good, please continue soon because I loe to see poor Max in pain, Kai more but Max is ok too

Nice start, please continue soon

good beginning, please continiu