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Forever Rahhel 4/25/06 . chapter 1
These is the romantic stuff I like.
Withdrawn 4/6/06 . chapter 1
Brilliance incarnate. It was just too cute. Not to mention funny. I especially loved the 'critically eyed the bit of coronary diease on a fork.' I mean, seriously, how can you get funnier than that? I loved it. Perfect.
OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOIN 1/6/06 . chapter 1
Awesome... Talent is seeping from this piece...

Cheerio,

Naon
Danny 8/25/03 . chapter 1
Lovely, just lovely (lol). I really love Shinji/Asuka fics. Keep up the good work.

Keep on writing.

High Hopes Here

Danny
Maeko 6/2/03 . chapter 1
Yay, kiss! It was so cute how he grinned and ran away. Shinji really pulls off being nervous and a little dorky so well. Hee hee! _
PukiPuki 8/14/02 . chapter 1
::thursts out arm in a thumbs-up gesture:: My compliments, yet again. Again, the characters were captured well, both sides of their personalities too. And more importantly, no part of the fic was rushed too much.
Jho 3/13/02 . chapter 1
aww :)
Demonic-Engel 10/10/01 . chapter 1
Cool _
Ishshi 6/25/01 . chapter 1
WAI! Me like, me like! Its GREAT!
Lin-lin 4/12/01 . chapter 1
A great story Shizumaru!

One of the best Asuka and Shinji fanfiction I have ever read;Fantastic!

You are a are a great writer!
WeltallElite 3/8/01 . chapter 1
That was really nicely done! You know that for people like Shinji and Asuka, who have so many emotional wounds, getting into a relationship, and learning to trust and rely on someone isn't easy. It takes time for those wounds to heal. I think you're doing a great job of portraying this gradual healing process. I hope to see more work from you on this story! Later!
Umi no Yuki 2/27/01 . chapter 1
It was really cute, like little kid romance. It's well written and I enjoyed reading it.
Narf-for-the-Garthoc 2/25/01 . chapter 1
Just curious... when can we expect that 4th chapter? _ As always, the story is excellent, heck, I think this is my second time reviewing it!
Mav Phoenix 2/18/01 . chapter 1
A good wine needs time to develop. Its not important how fast you actually writes. The only thing that should matter is the result in the end, and I must say that youre story was really good. Shinji/Asuka are my favorites so thanks a lot for such a nice romance story.
Worldmage 2/12/01 . chapter 1
Still no real spelling or grammatical errors detected; still in need of minor polishing (you seem to shy away from the past-perfect tense for some reason, and tend to be wordier than necessary)... but it's still an excellent fic to cap an excellent sequence. I like how the story works without much really happening... a lot of Eva fics focus on events as much as the psychological aspect, or the setting, or the mood.
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