 Forever Rahhel 4/25/06 . chapter 1These is the romantic stuff I like. |
 Withdrawn 4/6/06 . chapter 1Brilliance incarnate. It was just too cute. Not to mention funny. I especially loved the 'critically eyed the bit of coronary diease on a fork.' I mean, seriously, how can you get funnier than that? I loved it. Perfect. |
 OUBWIUBGPPPINSOJNONOICNFSOIN 1/6/06 . chapter 1Awesome... Talent is seeping from this piece...
Cheerio,
Naon |
 Danny 8/25/03 . chapter 1 Lovely, just lovely (lol). I really love Shinji/Asuka fics. Keep up the good work.
Keep on writing.
High Hopes Here
Danny |
 Maeko 6/2/03 . chapter 1Yay, kiss! It was so cute how he grinned and ran away. Shinji really pulls off being nervous and a little dorky so well. Hee hee! _ |
 PukiPuki 8/14/02 . chapter 1::thursts out arm in a thumbs-up gesture:: My compliments, yet again. Again, the characters were captured well, both sides of their personalities too. And more importantly, no part of the fic was rushed too much. |
 Jho 3/13/02 . chapter 1aww :) |
 Demonic-Engel 10/10/01 . chapter 1Cool _ |
 Ishshi 6/25/01 . chapter 1WAI! Me like, me like! Its GREAT! |
 Lin-lin 4/12/01 . chapter 1 A great story Shizumaru!
One of the best Asuka and Shinji fanfiction I have ever read;Fantastic!
You are a are a great writer! |
 WeltallElite 3/8/01 . chapter 1 That was really nicely done! You know that for people like Shinji and Asuka, who have so many emotional wounds, getting into a relationship, and learning to trust and rely on someone isn't easy. It takes time for those wounds to heal. I think you're doing a great job of portraying this gradual healing process. I hope to see more work from you on this story! Later! |
 Umi no Yuki 2/27/01 . chapter 1It was really cute, like little kid romance. It's well written and I enjoyed reading it. |
 Narf-for-the-Garthoc 2/25/01 . chapter 1Just curious... when can we expect that 4th chapter? _ As always, the story is excellent, heck, I think this is my second time reviewing it! |
 Mav Phoenix 2/18/01 . chapter 1A good wine needs time to develop. Its not important how fast you actually writes. The only thing that should matter is the result in the end, and I must say that youre story was really good. Shinji/Asuka are my favorites so thanks a lot for such a nice romance story. |
 Worldmage 2/12/01 . chapter 1Still no real spelling or grammatical errors detected; still in need of minor polishing (you seem to shy away from the past-perfect tense for some reason, and tend to be wordier than necessary)... but it's still an excellent fic to cap an excellent sequence. I like how the story works without much really happening... a lot of Eva fics focus on events as much as the psychological aspect, or the setting, or the mood. |