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| Forever Rahhel 2006-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseThese is the romantic stuff I like. |
| Withdrawn 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseBrilliance incarnate. It was just too cute. Not to mention funny. I especially loved the 'critically eyed the bit of coronary diease on a fork.' I mean, seriously, how can you get funnier than that?! I loved it. Perfect. |
| Naon Tiotami 2006-01-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome... Talent is seeping from this piece... Cheerio, Naon |
| Danny 2003-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely, just lovely (lol). I really love Shinji/Asuka fics. Keep up the good work. Keep on writing. High Hopes Here Danny |
| Maeko 2003-06-02 ch 1, | abuseYay, kiss! It was so cute how he grinned and ran away. Shinji really pulls off being nervous and a little dorky so well. Hee hee! ^_^ |
| PukiPuki 2002-08-14 ch 1, | abuse::thursts out arm in a thumbs-up gesture:: My compliments, yet again. Again, the characters were captured well, both sides of their personalities too. And more importantly, no part of the fic was rushed too much. |
| Jho 2002-03-13 ch 1, | abuseaww :) |
| Demonic-Engel 2001-10-10 ch 1, | abuseCool ^_^ |
| Ishshi 2001-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWAI! Me like, me like! Its GREAT!! |
| Lin-lin 2001-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseA great story Shizumaru! One of the best Asuka and Shinji fanfiction I have ever read;Fantastic! You are a are a great writer!! |
| Weltall_Elite 2001-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really nicely done! You know that for people like Shinji and Asuka, who have so many emotional wounds, getting into a relationship, and learning to trust and rely on someone isn't easy. It takes time for those wounds to heal. I think you're doing a great job of portraying this gradual healing process. I hope to see more work from you on this story! Later! |
| Umi no Yuki 2001-02-27 ch 1, | abuseIt was really cute, like little kid romance. It's well written and I enjoyed reading it. |
| Doc Destructo 2001-02-25 ch 1, | abuseJust curious... when can we expect that 4th chapter? ^_^ As always, the story is excellent, heck, I think this is my second time reviewing it! |
| Mav Phoenix 2001-02-18 ch 1, | abuseA good wine needs time to develop. It´s not important how fast you actually writes. The only thing that should matter is the result in the end, and I must say that youre story was really good. Shinji/Asuka are my favorites so thanks a lot for such a nice romance story. |
| Worldmage 2001-02-12 ch 1, | abuseStill no real spelling or grammatical errors detected; still in need of minor polishing (you seem to shy away from the past-perfect tense for some reason, and tend to be wordier than necessary)... but it's still an excellent fic to cap an excellent sequence. I like how the story works without much really happening... a lot of Eva fics focus on events as much as the psychological aspect, or the setting, or the mood. |