|Reviews for Flawed Perfection|
| flaming rose 6/9/13 . chapter 26
Yay! So happy! I love it to bits! 'Can't wait 4 the 1 shot! Thank u so much, and happy summer, y'all!
| Nagineus 6/9/13 . chapter 1
Oh yay for a sequel! :)
Haha, the part about the cloud and rain over Harry's scar really cracked me up xD and poor Harry, I wonder what you have in store for him next; time to find out! :D
| flaming rose 6/8/13 . chapter 2
Yay! I found it! So happy! So, so happy!
| Guest in Europe 5/12/13 . chapter 27
Oooh! Angsty angsty... but weepy in parts.
Excellent tale well-told.
| Kage 5243 5/7/13 . chapter 27
| Silvers45 5/4/13 . chapter 27
Oh my God. I actually finished it.
Alrighty then. Now, I know this was done ages ago and I don't care - I just want to say this was one of the best multi-chaptered stories I've seen on FanFiction, and that's saying a lot. It's a bizarre, different, AU HP story I never thought I'd read but right now I've actually finished it and I even have this great empty oh-my-GOSH-what do-I-DO-with-my-life-now feeling you get when you finish a really, really, horribly good story.
I'm not going to say it's flawless - there's definitely room for improvement, maybe in the dialogue a bit - but the plot, the words you use... God. Every time there's a row or even any kind of disagreement between Harry and Snape, or Harry and Sirius I swear I can feel my heart being ripped out of my chest.
And every time something funny comes up - especially the part where they watch a horror movie, and the epilogue (I don't even know if you remember writing that, but I sure hope you do), I can't even help but just grin really really wide.
And the parts where Harry was in a coma... well. Let's just say by the time I got to everyone talking to Harry, even if he was unconscious, I was a sobbing mess. A waterfall of tears. A victim of onion-cutting ninjas. Really. I mean, there were puddles on my pillow! HUGE puddles!
So yeah. I think that's about it. This was brilliant, well-done, and very very catching, so now I'll definitely be reading Full Circle. And now I've written you a horrifyingly long review, but it's only 'cause I didn't review the other 26 chapters. Hope I'm not spamming up your email.
| Guest 5/1/13 . chapter 20
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| StoryTell 4/25/13 . chapter 10
I'm sorry to bother you but I think there is something wrong with chapter ten...There are huge chunks missing...I've read this story before so I know what should be there and this is one of my fav chapters but it's all whacked out...
| Guest 4/22/13 . chapter 26
Lol. He was crying. I laughed.
| Boggart 4/22/13 . chapter 23
Um, why exactly is Harry screaming that Callahan is a traitor when doing so will have completely no use but waste his breath and embarrass himself? Typical Gryffindor LOL. Plus Harry and Voldemort are half-bloods, not mudbloods. Just in case you haven't noticed already
| Ho hum 4/20/13 . chapter 12
Ho hum. Harry is acting like a total sissy. I've been through that before and I would be horrified if someone talked to me about it. And Sirius is like, so #%* annoying. Why does he feel the need to call Harry "kiddo" every two seconds? Annoying as hell.
But other than that, your story is moderately good:)
| MuggleCreator 4/14/13 . chapter 27
The angst was very thick, but I loved the little moments in the story.
And this chapter... :)
| RegulusBlackIsAHero 4/9/13 . chapter 22
Damn it! Callahan was my favourite character!
| CupCakeyyy 4/5/13 . chapter 11
Huh? Ok I'm confused! I didn't really get the last chapter and the beginning of this one. It's like there's a huge part missing or something.. That much I could gather: Ginny and Harry obviously somehow pranked the Weasley boys and somehow Vernon reappeared and beat Harry up.. What happened to those parts? Were they deleated? 'Cause I don't think this was planned xD
| 9foxgrl 2/28/13 . chapter 27
That was just a great story! I just laughed when Draco began his speech to little Aden.