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Reviews for: Things That Go Bump In The Night
GuesssWho
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
They'll never die.
Nameless
2005-07-30 . chapter 1
Cool. I like the way you never state who it is, but it's still clear. You might want to tweak the second sentence, though - the grammar is offputting, even if it is a drabble. But that's just me being nitpicky.
Mouse
2004-06-12 . chapter 1
This is quite good. I like that it's in first person. Very interesting descriptions.
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