Lily's sense of fair play? Um, right.

But then, this was before DH, when we found out how very _special_ she actually was.

Shoot, eat the candy anyway, Snape. With luck you'll get the hair coming out in tiger stripes. Now, that would be cool.

"New today 'Instant Weasley' FREE SAMPLES"

-Collect the entire set!

I agree no HBP! This would be a wonderful expanded alternate! You do such a wonderful job!

The second chapter killed the humour of the first. Hilarious idea though.

Fun read and thanks for sharing!

I LOVE the idea of those as a product.

Quite honestly, I loved the first chapter, but the second was a bit heavy to read. Getting into morals, emotion, personality issues, etc with only vague mentioning (or something) sort of sucked the humor from the story. Still loved the first chapter though.

That's a very unique idea. The stuff with Snape was okay. I enjoyed that part even though I usually don't enjoy Snape being nice.

aww sevi has hope

Well any story that torments Snape can't be all bad.

Second chapter is somewhat ironic given Dreadful Hallows canon. The ending is a little rushed / non-sequitur.

A bit too sudden, but I like the idea of it.

Darn computer lab! Otherwise I'd burst out laughing! :)

I love your second chapter, to refer to Lily. It just...I don't know how I schould say it, it's just such a sweet part.

What started as a joke ended in a paradigm shift, eh? Cheers.

Ivy

Awesome! All it took was read hair.