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| Jack Doug 2005-02-12 ch 9, | abuseWhat a wonderful story! Loved all the time! I think that the Massachussets state (where Capeside is) allows gay marriage, which makes even better to Jack and Doug! :) I loved your story, please keep writing more about it! |
| boschette 2004-06-23 ch 9, | abuseSigh...(a contented one!) Well done! A beautiful ending to a great story. You've got such a knack for writing. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
| Phoenix Firefly 2004-06-19 ch 9, | abusewow! yay! its finished! but...ure story was so good! i loved this! so sweet...jack and doug but ure probably sick of hearing me say that. lol. Tobey? lol...sorry. im a bit obbessive. :P when's ure next fiction coming out! since i cant wait for another chpater i'll have to wait for the next story. yay! ure the best writer! Cheers, keep writing, never stop Phoenix |
| elkebaby 2004-06-10 ch 8, anon. | abusewow. good story. Love it! :-D |
| Phoenix Firefly 2004-06-10 ch 8, | abuseWOW!! this is so cool!! thanks for the little forward at the start! yay! thanks a lot :) i love this chapter, it is so sweet and so romantic! i love jack and Doug...im so happy dougie's alright now. yay. i loved the frustration of doug when he realised everything had screwed up. aw! keep going, im dying to read more of this and the other story of tobey...christmas is good. christmas is so romantic. maybe...ok, getting carried away. a smile in your direction Phoenix |
| boschette 2004-06-10 ch 8, | abuseOh my, how incredibly sweet! I'm giddy now that I've read that. Awesome job, Sam, and right on the money as always with these characters; I can actually see this happening! Beautiful. I can't wait for the next (final? how sad!) chapter. |
| Slow Dancing In A Burning R... 2004-05-26 ch 7, | abuseWow, this is amazing! I loved this chapter very much. You're a great author, I love this story! |
| Phoenix Firefly 2004-05-25 ch 7, | abuseomg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg! this is TOO good! tobey and jack..tobey and jack...was that for me? wow...that was so nice...i think i needed that! but now that jack gave that speech about how much he loves doug...i think its mean to think of jack/tobey...even though they're so cute! and i have to say, you really scared me for a minute there with the whole coffin thing--arg! i was nearly in tears before the whole "STOP" thing. ouch, that was nasty! but he's going to be ok, right? of course, he's doug witer...and he's cute and he can't leave jack alone. ever. but, i wanna know how much tobey loves this Ryan guy...not too much! he wants jack back, doent he? yes...no! anyway, fighting with my conscience...so i had beter go sort it out. lol...ure brilliant, ure wonderful, keep writing...quickly! Cheers! thanks for the a/n @ the start. they excite me. lol. Phoenix |
| the_roman_guardian 2004-05-24 ch 7, anon. | abuseI like it, Keep the good work comming!! |
| boschette 2004-05-24 ch 7, | abuseHi Sam! I'm sorry, I haven't reviewed in awhile because I haven't been on this site in awhile. But I LOVED the last three chapters! Wonderful characterizations all around, and I can really feel the emotions Jack is experiencing. Please forgive me for dropping off the face of the earth review-wise, but thanks for updating, and do it again soon! =) |
| anne918 2004-05-21 ch 6, | abuseAMAZING! You captured the warmth of Doug and Jacks relationship wonderfully. I was on the edge of my seat through the whole chapter. I'm adding this story to my favorites. You have an extreme talent and I hope to read more soon. :) -Gina |
| Phoenix Firefly 2004-05-15 ch 6, | abusethis is so sweet! this might sound a bit weird but i sorta imagined that Doug would be a ...top...but the again the first time he wouldnt know...anyway, good story! im still herer! hey! keep it up! wanting more--and Tobey, my love! TOBEY TOBEY TOBEY! keep writing Phoenix |
| the_roman_guardian 2004-05-02 ch 5, anon. | abuseHi, I just wanted to say that I like yor fic...I hope you can update it soon. ;) |
| Phoenix Firefly 2004-04-24 ch 5, | abusethis is such a good fanfic! but i find it hard to do the whole jack/doug when Tobey's around. coz i love Tobey so much! and i love him with jack but...well, its a good story so i guess i'll perervere. good work, keep it up! Phoenix |
| boschette 2004-04-09 ch 4, | abuseOh, that was WONDERFUL! The best chapter yet, and you've gotten me so caught up in this story. Please update soon. I can't wait for more! |