NO!

aw thats sad... please continue... whats the name?

(Just so you know, a.k.a. HUH! and WOAH!)

interesting. I still like your style COntinue writing.

uh... huh. well that was ... different! i ... think? 0_o

I agree, that was kind of a harsh one. It's a little hard to imagine Chakotay using his longtime friend that way, or for that matter B'Elanna allowing it... but then, it is fiction.

Yow, this is harsh. But, you know, I liked it. Poor B'Elanna. Poor Chak, too, I suppose. Still, you managed to get a lot said in very few words.