Ooh! This is brilliant. I always loved the character of the Intendant, and this captures her perfectly: reveling in her power and extremely sensual but with sinister undertones, especially in the last line. Really excellent. :D

It's too short, IMHO, although I think it could be expanded and be more descriptive...

I hadn't been expecting something so short... I had to read it twice before I figured it out.

Is this a story? I can't imagine any work consisting of two paragraphs being remotely entertaining. It's an interesting idea, but a long way from a story.

Okay, my knowledge of DS9 is a little rusty, but I liked this little ficlet. Very direct, with a definite sense of raw emotion to it.