this was a great story.

-gasp- -contented sigh- I luv it! it's so cute & it's really well written u made it so real & not cheesey at all!

I had a operation and you do feel like you are floating in water. It was very interesting?

Okay. I like S/R/H, and I like MPreg. But this fic was just..meh. It was okay, nothing great, interesting enough to keep reading. But I'm stopping after this chapter. Why? Because Harry wasn't mad, AT ALL, for Ron endangering his babies. "Heh, I almost lost my babies because my stupid "best" friend pushed me on a table, right into my stomach! But that's okay, because I'm stupid. :D". It just didn't sit right with me. Bleh.

I'v lost count on how many times i'v read this but I still think it's amazing!!lol

That was absolutely brilliant - disturbing but brilliant!! I didn't want it to end at all. I was so intruiged by it!! I hoope you write lots more!! Secret Angel xx

A friend of mine recomended this to me. Luv it!

oh this story was so cool! i am the younger twin and my sister never let's me forget it! i look forward to more of your work. i'm glad harry was finally able to be happy.

That was so cute! I like the names too!

I love this story...it's in my favourites...but i was curious about one thing...wouldn't sam be cedric's niece if her father was cedric's brother, not his cousin?

Very cute, I think you should write another one.

Kat

I like this, especially after the sixth book, gr, I cherish these AU's more than anything. it's basic therapy while everyone recovers from Sirius' and a certain professor's death. PS I SO hope Remus becomes a bigger part in seventh book. If Rowling doesn't at least do that, I'm going to resent her SO much. Btw, do you know who the HBP is? I've read that far, but unfortunately, I skipped half the chapters! I'm going to go back and read it properly, but I'm in college, I don't have much time...

Shadow

whoa...

I really like the idea of this story, and it's nice to see this pairing in something other than a PWP (I've noticed a lot of those). I do believe, however, that you owe it to the potential in your story, the potential in yourself as a writer, and your readers to at least run spell-check before you post something. There were several easy-to-spot errors that really would have made a BIG difference. I understand that some people don't have a WP with spellcheck, and if that's the case, I'm sure that if you asked, one of your readers would be glad to run it for you.

Understand that this isn't a flame; I have no problem with your subject matter, nor your story line. I simply feel it my duty as a reader (who finds your ideas interesting and worth-while) to inform you that your story is very difficult to read as it is. It takes only moments to run spell-check (or even to re-read your story yourself), and would make a BIG difference.

Please continue writing, you have potential and the more you write, the better you will get. I hope my suggestion helps.

If her dad was Cedric's brother, then Cedric would've been her uncle, not her cousin.