great story! can't wait to read your other stories!!

Hey, this was a really good fic. I'm not usually a big fan of having Davis and Yolei pair up, but it worked for this story.

Please make a sequel to this
i would definatley read
i promise
by the way, you have great skills as a writer

damn this was good. i read all 5 chapters in one day. very nice story!! (wish there was more Ken in it though...) but anyway this was very very very good. sad that u wont be writing anymore digimon stories. u are a very good writer (and a lot better then me lol). ;-D

What a great ending. This was a great original story.

Not a bad ending

story abit short but still good story.

Good Job!

Keep it up
AND Keep On Writing!

Great end to the chapter, very much like the last battle in Tenchi Muyo the Movie. Not that it is a bad thing, I like the show, despite how strange it might seem at times.

Sorry to hear that your time in the digimon section drawing to an end, I like your stories a lot. But everyone needs to change I guess.

So, what show will your next stories be about I wonder, no matte rwhat it is, I know I will read it.

Demino.

this was a great story, its too bad that this is your last taiora, or digimon story for that matter. so i hope you'll come back and write some more in the future

What a cliffhanger, at least york is dead. But he already changed history.

OMG! Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat!

Not bad...

This is getting interesting
Keep going

Keep it up
AND Keep On Writing!

Nice chapter, I'm really starting to like this story more and more. I also liked how you changed the Myotismon returns moment, but I wouldn't have minded having the fight between Malomyotismon and Deamon last a bit longer.

Thought I had reviewed this one.

Anyway it's a great chapter. Up there with the other ones, but I wonder how they will work around some of the problems that are going to show up when you temper with time.

Wow! its been awile since you updated. I hope they can stop york.

This is really good, great storyline. I look forward to reading the next part.