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Reviews For: Ring My Bell

theoneandonlykaorin 2007-12-05 ch 9, anon.	abuse...Since I don't have time to review them individually, i'll say it in one review... Okay, Yomi's was depressing. But I do think that she has some underlying problems... As for Tomo's...Umm...Is she like a naked Energizer bunny? (Sorry, that's just what came to mind when reading it...) Chiyo's-Yes, I agree with her poem. Osaka's-Even though it was funny, were you meaning to belittle God? Most people know what the Bible is by now, but hey, it's Osaka. Kagura's-...Why doe it make me think of Star Wars? (that thing Yoda said about fear leading to hate, yadda yadda, etc. Nyamo's-Very true. You know, people say that the twin towers were referenced to in the bible somehow in revelations but...Never read it saying that and I should know, Tha's may favorite part! (end of the world, etc...) Yukari's- Yup. Sounds like her alright... Sakaki- ...She will, eventually...(glazed look in eyes...) Kaorin's-(Moi?) Yes, you captured every emotion perfectly... It makes me think about that Rascal Flatts song... But I can't remember it's name...Said something about" teardrops falling like rain"...So yeah. Overall review: Are you like a major in psychology or something? because these poems are deep! It's like what they all feel, but not where they know, like in the subconsious... Kind of Proffessional sounding, really.
Thyryam 2007-10-26 ch 9,	abuseSome of these were really very good. Somehow, I felt that sometimes they were only skimming the surface of some characteristic that a character might have, but others were delving deep into the inner perspectives and thoughts of them. Good work.
Mirai 2005-04-15 ch 9, anon.	abuseWow, I loved all of the poems! They were great! It really, sorta, showed the real side of the characters, but not in a cheesy way.
KG4 2005-03-08 ch 4,	abuseWho doesn't hate dirty old men?! He is SO creepy! I feel sorry for Sakaki (try saying that 5 times fast) she's a normal person, and she's lucky to have big boobs! T.T Just kidding!
KG4 2005-03-08 ch 3,	abuse'Joos'? lol, thats Air-Headed Osaka all right!
KG4 2005-03-08 ch 2,	abuseWow! I can just hear Tomo reciting this poem! You really caught her energetic persoality really well! Adding to favorites!
MadHattess 2004-12-01 ch 2,	abuseI had mixed feelings on Yomi's Borderline, but this is perfect for Tomo. Silly, bouncing, a little arrogant and totally sincere.
PockyGirl of the Phoenix So... 2004-09-09 ch 9,	abuseMan you know your poetry! Keep up the good work! I wonder, are you going to do Kimura-sensei and Chiyo's "DAD" too? Heres a good one: how about Kamineco, maya and Mr. Tadakichi! LOL!
PockyGirl of the Phoenix So... 2004-09-06 ch 6,	abusethe poems are really good! Are you going to do one for the teachers? or or chihiro or Kaorin? I will be looking forword to them!
Alejandro Lee 2004-03-20 ch 4,	abuseAh, Azumanga Daioh- how easily it worms its way into our hearts.. ^^;; That was a nice pleasant read- I especially had fun reading 'Fireball' and 'Kowgal' - the pacing of the stanzas really invoked the characters themselves. Sakaki's narrative, to me seemed a bit too literal (sorry!) I just imagine she'd be too embarassed to even have any thoughts on sex - and instead create more stories about Chiyo no 'tousan. ^~ But at least you had Sakaki fail to mention her "admirer", so you gots the right idea..! XD "Get away, Chiyo! She's absorbing something from you!"

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