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The Magic Pocket Turtle
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Hehe, this actually made me giggle quite a bit. I love Alfred, and the fact that he won THAT much without even MENTIONING his employer's night job, is hilarious. I loved how you only alluded to facts, instead of spelling them out- I think that added to the humor, because it lets the mind wander ever so...
PadfootRawr
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
I think i just laughed myself sick too! xD
Princess613
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
laughing...
(5 minuets later)

Still laughing
lizzy
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
Freakin' hilarious. Utterly loved the ending. That last line made me laugh so hard I may have inadvertently killed several thousand brain cells. I want to get me one of them spoons :D
Mariagoner
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
I think I am dead of laughter now. You've honestly slaughtered me!
Thornwitch
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
That totally rocked. You could do a follow-up story on the rummage sale Alfred runs to unload all the junk!
Turtle Kid
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
I'm so glad I read this. ^_^
J.A.
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
I laughed hysterically the whole way through. Pitch-perfect Alfred (he roundly deserves his chance for payback and more stories like this). I almost never leave reviews, but this was too good not to comment.
Captain-Emily
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
This fic is amazing! I love the way you've written Alfred. Not to mention the boys; they're adorable here.

Do you perhaps have anymore fics in mind using Alfred? Maybe even with Carruthers making an appearance? Though his part was brief, I'd love to see him in another fic.

If Alfred won first through twenty-seventh place with just tales from Wayne Manor's kitchen, imagine what he could have won if he'd brought out Batclan stories...
Lansday-Larry
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
haha you had me laughing for about 5 minutes at the end of this fic, Wonderful job!

-Larry
Jedi-Bant
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
Haha, Thanks i needed a good laugh, this was fantastic. Love Alfred resisting until the last minute, before cracking, and the reject christmas presents. Of course, Flash finding the spoon at the end was just the iceing on the cake. Thanks for a great read.

Jedi_Bant
Elaine
2008-08-05 . chapter 1
Very enjoyable. (And it's about time Alfred got some props)
Dream7
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
XD
alphabet
2008-06-07 . chapter 1
That was hysterical. Loved the misdirection and the reveal and that snippet at the end was the icing on the cake. Thanks for sharing!
hoheehum
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
That
was
brilliant!
XD
SO much love for the grand prize XD
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