Reviews for Aftermath: A Story of Blended Clichés’

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Maximillian1 2008-08-05 ch 33,	abuseJust read 1-33 in one go. My back aches from sitting hunched over a laptop all day! Absolutely wonderful - one of the best Ranma/Senshi fics I have ever read.
DCWestby 2008-07-18 ch 33,	abuseWow. You wrote this very well. Having the reader seemingly get varied opinions as this story progressed. Very good. Yet A great many stories deal with Ranma always becoming more powerful and learning to control that power. I think we all find the idea of a human with so much power appealing, yet, as you write this, you also attempt to illustrate that power can corrupt easily. A human with too much power is too dangerous left unchecked. Your story illustrates that very well.
moritynz 2008-07-16 ch 18,	abuseThat was good. I don't think I will go any further though. End of Juuban seems like a good place to leave off and I have never been to keen on Ranma hooking up with a guy even such a feminine Ranma. All the same a very good story, some very thought provoking material, well written.
Michelle 2008-01-24 ch 23, anon.	abuseAh My Goddess to Ghostbusters to Flash Gordon? I think I'm in love.
JWG 2007-10-31 ch 33,	abuseWell sir, after being reluctant to start this ode (because of the threatened cliche's in the title no less) I finally checked it out and figuratively "couldn't put it down." I didn't see much point in leaving a review after each chapter since it was already complete, but I can truly say, "I wish I'd started reading while you were writing and been able to weigh in on things." I don't usually go for Ranma as a girl or embracing the feminine in an absolute manner, but your version is very palatable. I was glad to read you intend to give this a thorough "scrubbing" as far as the homophone problem is concerned. It's such a great piece, it DESERVES to have all those little gaffs corrected. Actually, I'd be willing to help you "polish" this little beauty. Just correct the homophones, supply the obviously omitted words, you know, just tidy it up a bit, if you'd be interested. I've had a bit of copy editor experience in RL. I've added it to my Favorite Stories list and intend to check out your other work in the future. If you get a chance, I'd appreciate it if you'd check out my story. I know it's rough, especially the early chapters, (The lead is going to get rewritten so it "hooks" readers better, and a bit more plot applied to the early section) but I'd like your critical impression, if you wouldn't mind. I'm working on that "outline the whole thing" trick you've got working, instead of the "here's an interesting scenerio, let's try to weave it in," method I used when I started it. I'm learning. A great job! Write Something Everyday. -JW
SGXGiant 2007-10-08 ch 20,	abuseHey i know you get this all the time but it was a realy good read and i was just wondering if you are going finish this new arc you started in.
The-Shadow002 2007-09-25 ch 33,	abuseThis was a fabulous story and I cannot say how much I enjoyed reading it. Normally I cannot stand crossovers but after I read your 1st chapter I laughed alot finding it to be great and then continued reading and just couldn't get enough of the rest of your story. It was fabulously done. One of the things I liked best was the way in which you portrayed the sheer amount of power that Ranma has not to mention her sheer age and that of everything else I think you conveyed it excellently and did a great job. Thank you for an extremely entertaining story that I just couldn't stop reading and I'm sad now that I've reached the end of it, just because it ended. Thanks.
mikebreslau 2007-09-17 ch 33,	abuseHaving finished the whole story, I thought I'd go back and reread Chapter 1. I immediately noticed how much your writing skill has improved. It reminds me of my own writing experience. My first fanfic, "Keiichi's Magic Trick", was a short story built around a simple premise: Keiichi has become immortal as an unexpected result of having his wish granted. This got me thinking, "what comes next?" The answer was my second fic, "Megumi No Megami", which was near-novel length and possibly the best story I've ever written. It was a gas writing those, and it's been a gas reading yours. Thanks for contributng. Mike
mikebreslau 2007-09-15 ch 25,	abuse"Washu sighed. This was not want she wanted to be doing." Come again? Surely that "want" ought to be something else. Pocky? Yum! Anyways, I'm really enjoying this fic. If it's really your first, you are to be commended.
sowhatimlate 2007-08-06 ch 33,	abusei really really loved this!
smill11@hotmail.com 2007-07-03 ch 33, anon.	abuseWell, it doesn't really come better than that. This piece of work is my absolute favorite Ranma fic. On a side note, I hope you continue to write many fics in this calibre :)
MeatLips 2007-03-28 ch 33, anon.	abuseOutstanding. Your initial one-shot was humorous by itself, mixing in all those Ranma fanfic cliches. But then writing a full epic story that actually incorporated all those cliches, and doing it WELL. Wow. I could really see your growth as a writer as the story progressed. It was a gradual evolution of style. Grammar got better, spelling improved, and the overall storyline just plainly DIDN'T SUCK. I mean, how many Ramna fanfics have him going from a disowned homeless female ronin, to a freaking GOD. I loved this story. Now I have to go check out your other work. Don't stop creating, dude. This was pure magic.
Weeaboo Murder Suspect 2007-03-27 ch 1,	abuseWow, what a coward, not even posting on his account to voice his shallow and ignorance filled comments. Way to go noob. Don't listen to the prick, your story is top quality, albeit its grammatical mistakes for certain words.
Vilkath 2007-03-08 ch 1,	abuseI guess I go into the group of.. I can't believe it. I"m not totaly against fics where Ranma is a girl, and ends up liking it. But starting the story off that way with a big white wash of plot to fill in the holes gets me. I'd rather have detail situations and events build up to it, not just a quick paragraph telling you everything is fine. This is a long, and possibly great fic, but I feel that weak start ruined the fic for me. I think I would rather accepted Ranma being a girl permently more if he at least still didn't like men. He has probably the best excuse in the world to be a lesbian, casual experiences with men.. maybe. But marriage just don't see it.
Shinji Ikari 2007-03-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat the is this garbage? Ranmas not only stuck as a girl but yet again forced to be a scout and is married to a guy no less and DOESN'T GIVE A !! I've read some stupid stories but this ranks at the top. Couldn't get past the first page. People like you destroy Ranma fanfiction. Have a nice day

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