You guys kiss too much, I mean, in the movies, there are about 4 kisses each. You had ovre 20 in 10 Chapters... lmao, savvy? Jacks just too hot for you i guess... [ lol jks. hes mine p

O_O

NO WAY.

next sequel...

I love the story,so glad i won! i never win anything.And i think their third child should be named Kimmi, and obviously be a girl

NO! Please write a third story! I liv this series!
O, and I just wanted to give you snaps on two particular parts of this story...the first on is...
IMPERSONATING A CLERGYMEN OF THE CHURCH OF ENGLAND! I absolutely luv this line from the movie lol..I laughed for a good ten minutes on this!
The second is...
MR. AND MRS. RICKY PAPERBOY! (full house all the way baby lol!) YOU ROCK!

That was really... sad... hope u keep writing!

I was hoping that poor Commie Norrington would finally get a girl...Unfortunately I was wrong. I'm beginning to think that Amanda might be better off with Norrington than Sparrow.

you...cant...finish...there! thats just mean! how...what? what happens. please tell me your doing a sequal? you have to. if you dont i will come and get you. mwhahahahaha! please do some more!
Suzy xx

Great story, She should definnatly dump him and get on a ship to port royal to stay there with the kids! then the seqeul can be Jack finding them again.

Jack's in trouble now!
Amanda's probably gonna slap him, and then Jack'll think he really truly deserved that and he'll apologize for ages till Amanda forgives him and then they end up having sex! Yay! lol

she gonna dump 'im!

this is really funi! I guess this is before the movie... Kool

great chappie. update soon. :)
Suzy x

great chapter update soon
Suzy x

I'm looking forward 4 the nxt chap! this is getting so mcuh funi!

o! Getting sassy now, aren't we? Loved this chappie!