Obi-Wan was kind of estupido baka in this but Tahl and Qui-Gon were smart yay!

Great! You're a fantastic writer - keep up the good work! May the Force be with you! _

that was cool. is there a sequel comming ?

Wahoo! That was great! Kind of ended abruptly but it was still great! Can't wait to read more of your works in the future!

Ooooooooh. I liked the whole series. Good descriptions, and you didn't loose hold on the plot (like I sometimes tend to do! ::blush::) I look foreward to reading more of your fix.

Nice i like it

Great story! Really enjoyable! Poor Xani though. :-(

I was waiting for that part to come out! GREAT work! I love Qui/Obi storys...(well, the *good* ones anyway...) :)

Wonderful job! I liked "hearing" Obi's thoughts. Very nice! :-)

Excellent! The second part was even better than the first (thanks for the clarification about Xanatos) Keep up the great work, I'll certainly read more! :)

Great job! Now pleeeeease post the second part!

And? And? Keep going! I want more!

Very interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next! This may be a stupid question but, who is Xanatos? Prior to your story I mean . . . Is he actually a character in the Star Wars novels or your own creation? Keep up the good work!

OOOOOOOOO! COOOOL! I love it! Whats gonna happpen! This is drivin' me bonkers! Ithis is such a cool series. I can't wait for more. Very well written!

I am aliking this story! Keep it up!