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| give-you-back 2006-08-08 ch 25, | abuseAlthough I'd definately need a sequel, it finished quite well, I thought but I'd definately read it if there was one. :) |
| qblisa 2006-04-23 ch 25, | abuseWell done... that was a well crafted Sarkney! It had as many plot twists as an Alias season!! Although some plot twist had some gaping holes, when taken at face value, they were exciting and extremely surprising. I must say that the recaps were annoying, but that's probably because I read the story in one go and really didn't need the recaps. Thanks for a great story. I'm glad it was a happy ending... almost. Cheers, Lisa :) |
| Lena 2005-12-02 ch 25, anon. | abusecome on you can't stop now. SEQUEL...YES |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 25, | abuseWonderful, wonderful!! I almost died from a heart attack when i read that Sydney went into a coma for six months and Sark got captured. Loved it when she tried to get him out..and managed to...and oh my gosh, they have a daughter together, and a sweet life! DAMN LUNATIC VAUGHN!! How could he do this to them! I hate him, i hate him! But im so glad you decided on a sequel...going to read it now! Overall: Great story; 25 mind-blowing chapters...loved it that you added so many twists in it to keep us all on our toes and intrigued! Each chapter is aptly named as well. I wish i could quote your lines properly, and review on them, but since i can't, well i hope a general review is alright with you! I simply love it that you included both sarcastic and witty Sark, as well as loving and concerned Sark in your story. Keep up the good work! =) |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 21, | abuseSigh, absolutely love it when they played pranks on each other...oh don't complain about being bad at smut or anything, coz you're so good at the nice fluffy parts! =) What's HAPPENING with Sydney?!! I realize you've left lots of cliffhangers for your poor readers...LOL...thankfully i'm going to read your next chapter now! Or i would have died not knowing what's going to come next! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 20, | abuseI can't believe this...so many twists and turns that you included! First off...Sydney finding out Sark cheated on her, and with LAUREN that b**ch?!! Oh no oh no...i was so fuming mad, and then i read how he did so because she thought he went off with Vaughn...sigh!! Your chapters just get better and better! You have a wonderful gift for adding in twists and turns when we least expect it. You go girl! I'm so glad i got to reading this story! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 15, | abuseI just love it that Sydney chose Sark over Vaughn...true love between them indeed...oh wonderful chapters...i can't believE you never let on any clue that you had written such great fics!! *angry glare* Well all's well now that i found them!! I absolutely loved it the way you describe Sydney unearthing everything...so wonderfully poignant...recovering all her memories..and your flashbacks were incorporated terrifically.=) Great job! BUT NOTHING HAD BETTER BE WRONG WITH SARK! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 13, | abuseWow. Just wow. i'm so hooked to this, i'm stopping everything else to read your full 25 chapters, aren't you honored? =) WHO LIED TO HER?!! Will...he told her the whole story...damn him!! So many obstacles in their way!! I can't wait for Sark to clarify everything with her,for them to fall in love again, leaving Vaughn and everyone else who's caused her so much pain! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 10, | abuseYou must be kidding me. Syd divorced Sark, and he was stalking her?!! Oh my goodness!! Fantastic twist, i never expected that! But poor, poor, Sark...*sniff* stalking her just shows how much he loves her...aw...how could Syd do that to him?! Can't WAIT to read the next part!! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 7, | abuseI LOVE where you're going with this! Love the protectiveness of Sark when he threatened Dr Webster, love it that he's so darned concerned about Sydney, enough to follow her to the hotel room and then WOW...their meeting! Got me all so excited!! Okay i don't really regret reading your fic only now...*grin* you know why? So there's no cliffhanger for me at all...my longing to know what happens next is satisfied immediately! *guilty smile* Can't wait for their heart-to-heart! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 4, | abuseOkay, i better cut back on reviewing every chapter, otherwise pple might think i'm stalking this or something; and you're bound to be bored with one reviewer giving many comments..*blush* OMG i just love stories which involve Sarkney in Syd's missing two years!! They got married?! Wow...and its great how you wrote Vaughn being jealous...haha i always love the Sa/S/V triangle. Fabulous but a nono to Syd being shot, poor girl!! But LOL to Sark bringing her in and proclaiming he's her hubby!! Way to make Vaughn insane with jealousy! |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 2, | abuseCliffhanger indeed! What's happening here?! Oh but its great she left a note for Sark; shows that she might somehow be concerned that he would wonder where she went. *grin* |
| sun-shy 2004-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, Sydney's running away with Sark!! Oh brilliant...just love that you've gone straight to the point instead of leaving readers hanging in there. Good plot, Sark coming to Syd's rescue! *happy dance* |
| laura 2004-10-15 ch 25, anon. | abuseMAYBE! urg please ur killing me do a sequel, please :) |
| Barymic 2004-04-19 ch 25, anon. | abuseSEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL! I got to know what happens with evil Vaughn. I hope Syd doesn't leave Sark!! I hope she gives it to him! |