“Ashes, to ashes. Dust, to dust.”?
Humm i have seen this line before..let's see where did i..Ohh i know!
It was a video on YouTube!It was about BeastBoy,it's title: Animal he became!

Excellent, Excellent story! It was awesome and probably the best story I ever read. I almost cried at the ending to. I'm so sad, I need a moment alone...

love is a terrible and powerful thing. It can lift you up with the wings of an angel, and throw you down crush your heart into millions of tiny fragments. this is the very first work of fiction that made me cry, in my 16 years. keep writing.

//cries// so sad

oh oh oh i could cry! this story is so nice!
coolcari

Poor Beast Boy! He's devil-possessed!

Funny when Gross suddenly cuts in normal Raven's speech "Hey I heard that!"

Terra's really pungent isn't she, calling Raven a Shadow even! Is this a reference to this fic's title?

I liked the idea of the "LIMBO of Raven's inner monologue", the point between consciousness and unconsciousness.

Very nice description of Raven's magic:
"it called upon its own spiritual attack – an ebony flame made from the fire of Raven's soul. The spirit put all of its (Raven's) strength into one final attack and let it fly as a draconian breath."—it’s nice and easy to visualize.

So spooky when BB suddenly assaults everyone. Heh, nice remark about Terra not being the ONLY traitor.

Keep up the good work!

-nice funny bits: ‘(everyone left except) BB (who had no plan) and Raven (who had no volition) ‘BB was stuck in her (Raven’s) embrace. Not that he minded.’

-beautiful descriptions as usual: ‘quiet dismal walls of Raven’s castle’,
‘siren of joy rang from the darkness’ but you COULD add even more of these!

-so sweet of Starfire to be Raven’s ‘moral support’! It was really touching when she stood up for her at the end of the movie.

-Cool! Timid can giggle!

-I wonder why Timid didn’t conjure any monsters like in “Fear Itself”

-scary ending: lots of suspense.

Woah, interesting juxtaposition of Happy's part and Anger + Pain fortelling the near future--torturing BB and death...Light and Dark...creepy.

Everyone, especially Terra and Beast Boy are so touchy about their relationships!

Cyborg's so big-brotherly! "Why not? She's been waiting her whole life for this day! She wants to experience these emotions to their fullest!" Aw!

Beaet Boy's feelings are so contradictory. But I'm glad he isn't 'bored' or Raven.

Happy was so adorable!

Everything's so awesome about this chapter!

--liked the THEME SONG at the beginning: really felt like a REAL episode!

--nice bits of humour: 'worshipping at the church of Gamestation" lol!
'Discrimination by emotion ain't fair." heh

--very attractive plot ideas:
name tags for all Raven's emotions,
'astral spirits' (I like the word Astral for some reason!),
Timid and Smart were the only ones who knew the library existed!
the "destrado"--cool!

--nice descriptions

--loved the way All the Emotions acted like complete individuals. Especially enjoyed the Brave and Gross interaction!

--Most of All: such a Touching portrayal of Raven's LONELINESS and her DESIRE FOR FREEDOM--makes me love her even more!

Keep up the excellent work whilst I read your next chapter, Seth Turtle!

omg! I'm totally bawling my eyes out!! I loved your story, and I'm looking forwards to reading the next. Damn! I wish every story was as great as yours! love it!

Taqueopariu caramba...to chorando o.O

sweetest thing ive ever read

OMG. That was AMAZING! I'm actually tearing up! That's such at good thing for this! WONDERFUL! On to story TWO!

Meh, this was pretty good, but not as great as your other stories with the Titans. Too bad Raven died . . .

::sigh:: it's over, and you're evil. I think it's kind of a let down that she died. The moral is that Raven really _can't_ live with normal people? I dunno. [ Aha, I see a sequel. >) ]
But like I said before, I like how it was a Titans story, not just the triangle three.